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That's what I thought :p

Thought I was gonna have a little Brendon//Elli action there huh? Tricked ya :D

FUCKYEA! Haha.
Well thank you, I tried to put some humor in this somewhat tragic story haha.
I felt it needed it so I'm glad you liked the chapter, but which scene with Elli and Brendon specifically. Just all of them in general or just one, hahaha sorry I'm curious :p

When Brendon started dancing I was like daaaaaamnnn, he isn't half bad. Betterten most of the boys I know

Haha I'm just making sure everyone witnesses the awesomness of this video.

Thanks very much for reading! I'm assuming that, although it made you cry, you liked it. XD The review is much appreciated.

Love Sheen

Hey!
Thanks for liking my story ^^ I'm really happy about how it's turning out myself.

ur welcome lol (=

no prob! thanks for accepting the invite :)

your welcome. im Bobbie

lmao that was a good lame pickup line lol
btw! thanks! lol

haha well thanks :)

I don't like vampire stories either but music video is my favorite and so I figured I would write something different then all the other dandie stories :D

Aw well thanks :)
some tips hmm, spell check will be your new best friend for the time being. If you have some errors- it's fine, but when someone new is speaking. You have to press enter. That's my pet peeve is when someone puts like 6 different people talking in one paragraph and doesn't tell you. It gets annoying. Other then that just write the best you can and never post a chapter your nervous about cause most of the time if your nervous about it you won't be confident in it and you always want to post a chapter your confident about cause then your readers will enjoy it.
And things that are cliché get kind of anoying after a while hahaha.
But that's all I can give you for now cause I don't know what really else I should tell you.
I'm just a 16 year old girl from NH, so I'm not the best writer but thank you for liking my stuff, I love to hear things like that from people :)

Ahh yes it is- i love it when he sings in 20 dollar nose bleed by FOB, when he growls I die :p lol
I'm working on a fan fiction about him actually. It's really odd and very different but I think some people may like it :D

First off, your profile is adorable! Second, thanks so much for the comment!

Don't we all :p

Thanks :) that means a lot hahaha. And :| I am like so jealous of you right now :|

Thank you for the story comment. it really means a lot to both me and Zelda that you took the time to comment!!!

Thanks for visiting my site :) I'm glad you chose to use a layout haha it made my day :))) no one ever comes to visit anymore :(

Oh I love new readers :)
thanks for reading it :D
and since you love John O'callaghan oh so much like myself. I'm co-writting a story about him. It's hard to explain but if you want to check it out ya can XD