Hanks for being the first commentor on Welcome to the Family! I appreciate it. Check out my other stories Dawn of Gears and A team of extraordinary gentlemen
I love your story "Love me and I might love you back." But might I suggest you format the chapters into a more standard reading style? What I mean is more paragraphs, and the rule that you start a new line everytime quotations are used. The spelling mistakes don't bother me as much as that. Cause it is hard to read when it's clump up like that. If you would like more suggestions I am more than willing to help. Like I said, I like the story, and applaud your bravery for writing it. :) =Holleywholly