shoefaerie / Comments

I've posted a new chapter in LS II if you're still interested.

It will be addressed I promise. I'm posting everything I already have written, I have another sixty pages in my document before I get to the chapter I am writing right now.

Thank you very much, Shoefaerie! I promise you I do fix all of that later on, except the less mentioned characters in her family, and that's because I can't keep up with them all. Even I lose track of them. Originally, Nightcrawler was in this series too, but I just couldn't write him properly and keep up so I had to write him out.

As for Lyrissa's becoming a superpower, as time goes I promise you that she isn't all powerful, and she does have her flaws that pull her down. I just put her through so much in the end of the last series, I had to give her a sort of break.

No you're right, and I will work that out.. I never thought about addressing that honestly. Thank you! It is a very important issue that slipped my mind completely. Thank you very much!

Aging issue? Do you mean between Lyrissa and Logan?