Hahaha well I'm glad I could make your day :)
I can't wait to read it & looking forward to getting my laptop back so I can bloody write something myself. Haha :)
Thank you for the story comment! Sorry if I've already said it, and if I haven't sorry this is so late. I've been MIA lately, but I'm back, haha - hopefully.
Wow, thank you so much. I've always thought my writing wasn't that great but the response I've been getting is amazing. :) I appreciate it so much. I'm glad my Harry story is one of the best :D haha
and I'll definitely take note on that. Trust me, I'll have a one shot for you after all my testing is done. It's been crazy!
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Mmhmm...I don't know...oh! maybe you could have a few chapters about how Violet's all upset that Darren's gone and how we're all trying to help her through it and being the interfering people that we are, we get Darren to come back for a weekend so the two can spend some more time together. Does that help you along with anything?
And as for me and Joey...not sure...I'm always sort of been a fan of the whole fall for your enemy thing lol So...me and Joey could be against each other but start getting closer because we're both worried about Violet and then we just kind of get together on a spur of the moment kind of thing? I'm not sure really...lol sorry I couldn't be of much help!
Well...I don't know...I'll think about it ;) bahaha! Nah, I'm totally in :D I'm message you some info after read an update to one of my other subscriptions :)
Thanks, Yeah, I should be fine soon. Oh, and for the record, you're more than welcome to use any ideas I give you, obviously, but if you don't I totally don't mind whatsoever! I'm just so excited to keep reading this story :)) ♥♥♥
Hm... You could either do a flashback or a flashforward. I mean, like tell the readers how they met and that kind of stuff. Or what they can expect in the future. Or you could fast forward a couple of months and put it into present time which would put Darren in Glee which could lead to more options to write about. Or Darren could go away for a couple of chapters and you can focus on the depression- not too much- but just enough so that readers can start to miss him. Maybe you could have Darren go away for Eastwick and when he gets back the Depression will kind of subside but once he needs to leave for Glee the Depression comes back full blown. Idk, sorry I'm probably not much help.
But the only thing that you don't want to do is send Darren away too early in the story because it just started, you know?
I hope that somewhat helps- I have the flu so if it doesn't make sense I'm blaming it on that :))
So I'm definitely sorry for not getting back to you earlier. I think that depression is a really good dramatic incline for this story, especially with Darren leaving and everything. I think it would be cool to see things from his point of view, maybe when he's on the airplane to LA or something.
I LOVE that you have AVPM references in this, I know I've said it before, but I just do.
I think that the way the story is heading so far is absolutely wonderful! Keep up the amazing work!
Truthfully, I'll read anything as long as it includes Darren, lol. Drama is okay since it's what keeps stories going,but I don't want so much drama that I don't know what's going on (personal taste.)
If you include tons of AVPM references I would die of happiness (but no worries, I would keep reading.) And so on and so forth.
Thanks for asking for my opinion! I give you mucho credit for that! Yeah. Plus you're writing a Darren story, dude, we could be like best friends or something. :)
I think that story-wise, there should obviously be some struggles within the new feelings and/or relationship since his carrer is taking off, but I can't stand cheating, so if you have that in mind, I respect you as an author, it's just another personal thing of mine.
Like other readers, I will do whatever you need me to do to inspire you to write and whatnot so please let me know.
I apologize for writing a book in your comments, haha, but I'm SUPER excited for this story.
~Alyson
I like A LOT of drama. Like, he gets her pregnant then leaves. Or he cheats on her. Stuff like that. Kind of the cliche plots, but that's what keeps me reading. Ha.
i dont know, i just didnt think that it was the best of chapters.