Hello there :)
Your story remember me reminds me of the concept my friend had for her story which has the same title and concept except without the kid. Did you read her story by any chance? It's just I find it a bit weird to see the summary of the story pretty similar to her story. Your story is a bit different and sounds pretty forced when you write. It doesn't flow as nicely as I would have thought and having no space between your paragraphs does make my head hurt or attempt to read it. When it's bunched up together like that it's harder to grasp I guess.
lmao i know! i was like what the hell! and when cas was all beaten up and he was telling dean how he wanted to make amends with dean and dean was like "do u feel better" and hes like "no" lmaooo its the little things hahaha
haha! thanks a lot! it's been really hard getting internet in my house, but times like right now, i have to travel to the library to get back and check facebook and stuffs xD
LOVE IT! EVERYBODY KNOWS IT'S TEE SHIRT TIIIIIIME!
Hey there. :) Welcome to Mibba. :D
I'm Chelsea Vengeance.
I'm working on a new story, with Jackson Rathbone [Jasper Hale from the Twilight movies] and I thought I'd just put it out there to see what people think.
It's NC-17 because of smut scenes to come, so if you don't like that sort of thing, this probably isn't the story for you, but it's pretty well written if I do say so myself. (:
If you can, please read it and leave comments? I'd love any kind of criticism, good or bad. :)
http://stories.mibba.com/read/385274/Beauty-is-Only-Skin-Deep/
thank you so so much for your sweet story comment!! =) There'll be an update real soon (and let me tell you this much: Dean and Amanda/Lilian/Josie aren't done with family planning... or not planning.... ;D)
thanks so much! =) xoxo
P.S. : Love your profile pic. ;D