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  • insomniac_invention

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    just wondering when you're going to update the game of seduction. i love it!
    January 2nd, 2012 at 08:00am
  • EveSinSpookell888

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    Ello, friend! Check out my story, journals and poems please! Oh, & comment if you haven't already, please.
    July 1st, 2011 at 05:16am
  • EveSinSpookell888

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    Oooooookay. XP I like Ian. :)
    June 25th, 2011 at 02:54pm
  • EveSinSpookell888

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    Hee-hee, I luv it! :D
    June 24th, 2011 at 11:53pm
  • EveSinSpookell888

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    Oh yeah, that's what I said to the Jackie pic, If only :)
    June 23rd, 2011 at 07:50am
  • EveSinSpookell888

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    I will soon, in about 2days; I'm finishing up another story 1st. BoyxBoy & GrlxGrl are my favorite types of stories, next to Supernatural. Oh, & please comment on my story! :D
    June 23rd, 2011 at 07:48am
  • fatendestinny

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    haha! exactly!!! and thats what i dont like! :P and probably many of the others too
    June 11th, 2011 at 03:23pm
  • fatendestinny

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    Haha its because she always gets in the way!!!!!! thats why many people dont like her
    June 8th, 2011 at 04:23pm
  • fatendestinny

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    haha no im not moving :D just for the summer visiting my aunt and uncles :D also cause my brothers now going to college there so ya :D yeah sounds like to but... theres gonna be so much problems and stuff! bleh! okies!! thats great! i'll read :P
    March 20th, 2011 at 05:28am
  • fatendestinny

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    haha thats cool! no problem :D but the problem is that my exams will start in may haha then i have my piano exams then i leave for the US... D: so i wont have much time to read it.. but dont worry i'll read on my little breaks :P ahha several of them which im already planning out :P haha
    March 19th, 2011 at 05:46pm
  • fatendestinny

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    when are you going to update GOS again??
    March 19th, 2011 at 06:39am
  • bloomsky

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    please Update
    December 17th, 2010 at 04:23pm
  • fatendestinny

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    I'm totally hooked to your story Game of seduction.. please please update!!
    December 6th, 2010 at 01:59pm
  • Toxicblood

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    I cant wait for another update on Game of Seduction. Totally addicted to this story. =]
    November 8th, 2010 at 12:57am
  • JustDifferent;

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    No problem :)
    October 28th, 2010 at 10:49pm
  • JustDifferent;

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    hey..just thought i'd mention that i like your game of seduction story.. it's rather addicting. :)
    October 28th, 2010 at 03:35am
  • kwon jiyong.

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    oh believe me, i can't resist top Happy face haha, he's right under gd
    umm, well, kpop related pretty much everything - shinee, beast, 2ne1, dbsk, f(x), ft island, boa, 2pm, 2am, jay park, etc.
    outside of kpop, still pretty much everything ;] haha
    what about you?
    October 8th, 2010 at 10:30pm
  • DarkAngel666

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    Lol!!!! Sorry I couldn't remember Nates name lol anyways yeah I understood that she hasn't told him how she feels but on the friend side of things I would expect him to act like he normally would and just be her friend lol I think I confussed you and myself lol anyways yeah I love game of seduction - I love writing and reading in the first person POV but in this instance I love how you've wrote it because you get a better feel for the whole plot if that makes any sense lol and I love the flashbacks more than you just implying what has happened hehehe...I abso-fucking-lutely love Ian he's so sexy and I love how he and Kia are with each other and you are building some very nice tension between them but Jess is really starting to piss me off because she always manages to interrupt and ruin the moment, it's not a bad thing at all I just can't wait for Kia and Ian to "get it on" lol but also it makes me wonder if Jess has a crush on Ian and is slightly jealous of how Kia holds his attention but maybe thats just me lol....I really hope it has a happy ending with Kia managing to change Ian's ways for the better and for them to be madly in love with each other xoxo
    October 8th, 2010 at 09:09pm
  • DarkAngel666

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    Hey your welcome on the story comment. It read very well, she seems shy and a little self concious which can be very good traits for a character and help build the tension between the person who she has fallen for, she didn't seem whiny at all however I know you mentioned that she has put some distance between her and the dude because of her unrequited feelings but if he was her best friend wouldn't he try and talk to her or at least acknowelge her that bit confussed me but I have a feeling that the reason why he hasn't will come out in further chapters. I really liked the first installment and I subscribed and please don't take offense if I offened you or disheartened you as that is not my intention and I really can't wait for the next update xoxo
    October 8th, 2010 at 07:06pm
  • kwon jiyong.

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    DD: no, i wish i was korean xD that would complete my life haha
    gd is my bb In Love what about you?
    October 8th, 2010 at 06:51am