Lizza.Wrights / Comments

hahah how is that story going by the way? haha lol and no it was quite good!! go akuma!!

i love it!!! next chapter soon pwease! hah lol it was good, total wave turner, i was at the edge at the seet i swear

yay!!!! i cant wait! im going to read it right now!

hahha! awesome! cant wait to read it!

mmkay whenever dooode, take your time tho

hehe im on all the time dude! im on all the time

hohhohohoh so yuor about to update then?

nope its a happy way of saying yup! and haha yeah thatd be a good thing to do

tiz ok! haha yah it happens, just go with your gut instinct yuppy! **shakes head enthusiastically**

haha its ok, its like writers intuition some major authors forget it too,theres alwaqys something new to learn (why all the sudden am i wise?) so ya dont worry. : )

i didnt know how much experience you had is all.and i too like being reminded,i mean, roughing up jayne and shinya punching would be aweosme!

are all those ideas like going to be used fer sure? cus they sound aweosme,i woluldnt mind reading shinya punching someone.they sound perfect but spread it out, cus if they happen all the same time,,its overwhelming for the readers,spread it out,so it can come as a surpirze too.

whats your other idea if you dont mind me asking? ive been writing for along time so yah

yeah! when all the guys are gne have jayne be on the tour bus alone,and thomas sneaks onto it and like corners her and like semi-ruffs her up

have him like corner her in the tour bus when everyone is gone and do bvad stuff and all

do it! are you comfortable with that idea?

wowwwwww, have her dream too about possible relationship with kyo,thatd be nice, like when shes debating who she liks the most, or it could be a warped ending

oh wow, hehe im guessing its with jaynes ex right? rays father? write it soon if you can!!

why not try both, like filler chapters? like have jayne is it? kiss shinya and see if theres sparks, if there isnt try kyo, personally id want to be with kyo the most

i love the story,and yah shinya seems the type of guy who knows how to tae care of children,but kyo has chemistry with the lead singer