right you have all seen this sad excuse of a poem, but ithink with your lots help it could be turn into a passable song. i wopuld like critisisum and advice? that mean u to danyelle!(verse 1)The road is so wet, the road is darkWay back then i needed your heart,I gave you mine but you broke it apart,You may think i am smiling,But on the inside i cry and i bleed,(verse 2)I am alone, its begining to...