Rachel Monroe / Comments

Hello (:
Thanks for commenting on Music Man.
I made the floor plan on the website "floorplanner.com". It's a great site and it's really simple to use once you get the hang of it!

I read your story 'Let Me Forget' it's good, hope you update soon!

Thanks heaps for you story comment on 'Colour' i am in the middle of updating it now and you should find out what happened in australia in the chapter after this :)

Hey, Rachel, thanks for commenting on my story! Uhh, it's gonna take a few more chapters for you to know what happened 'that night', but I promise it's going to be worth it! I'll try to update as soon as I can! Maybe this weekend, idk, University is kicking my ass right now, we'll see... But thanks again!

My family knows that I do write, but no one I know in person has ever ready anything I've ever read. And I don't expect to ever let them. I'm picky and get embarrassed about it.

And yeah, I've been checking back in on it, looking at the comments, seeing if she's updated, etc. I'm pretty sure that she'll try to change it now, but I'm being picky and that wouldn't be good enough for me now, it started as my story and even if she veers it in a different direction I still feel cheated.

I know that.
And honestly, I was really let down when this happened because I had never thought about the possibility of someone stealing one of my stories. My Grammy has asked me how I could stop someone from stealing it and I told her I wasn't worried about it. And I really wasn't. I trusted everyone.
So when this happened I felt like it was a huge smack in the face.

Yeah. For about two seconds I felt bad about bombarding her with my irate readers and telling her to take it down, but then I just read it again and became even more mad because every time I read it I see another similarity. I'm honestly just tired of all of this and want it to be over, but I don't think it will honestly be over.

Yeah, I thought that was real smart. >.<

Then she goes offending it and mentions how only like 10 things are the same.

I've posted the new chapter already. And I'm about to start work on another one.

Thanks for commenting! The next chapter will be ready, hopefully within the hour.

Thank you for your comment. I made Jacky a bit more of a badass, because I'm certain that Jacky is really only shy around new people... and maybe not so much as around people that he knows.

HEY :) Just to let you know, i updated both of my Max Green fanfics, Sweet Ransom and Four Letter Lie! Sorry for taking so long in updating! <3

Heyy, She Makes Me So Weak has been updated! 8D

I don't know if I was too clear on the past and present tense thing Lol Sorry about that. For example, I meant like in chapter one, you said "I was starving and I hated walking, yet I had no money for gas or food. I guess I’m just fucked." You changed tense right there. So my suggestion, instead of saying "I guess I'm just fucked." you could say "I knew I was fucked." Or something along those lines. :)

Hi! I read your Get Scared fanfic. I liked it! It was really creative :) But I think I have a few things that you could do to make your story better. The first thing I noticed was the grammar. I know mine isn't the best, but I think you could really make your story much better by rereading it once you've written it. There are a few errors that a lot of picky readers would notice, like simple spelling mistakes and changing from past to present tense. It's not major, but changing those things could really help. Another thing I think you could do is make your layout match the mood of your story. You talk about murderers and rain, but the background reminds me of winter. I think if you make a few simple changes like that, you could really get more readers to stay and subscribe. Just simple things like that. :) I hope I could help. I can promote your story in my next chapter if you'd like.

Heyyy thanks for the comment on my co-write She Makes Me So Weak. 8D
It means a lot <3

Hiiii (:
I just updated Sweet Ransom if you wanted to check it out.

Thanks for the comment :))

But I like to torture you ;D

LOL But what about Ronnie and Layla's friendship? ;)