Chaos Sisters / Comments

Thank you for the advice, and I will take it on board. It's always good when people give me ways to improve my work. I wrote the first chapter two years ago nearly so I was sure that the writing in the first 3 chapters was going to be a lot worse than they rest.

Thank you for your comments and I'll be sure to take them on board! :)

Thank you so much for pointing our the name change. Lee is a character from another story. I always do write Lee & catch myself, but seems I haven't. Thanks a bunch for catching it because I surely wouldn't have.

You're welcome. I hope you feel better.

I wanted to let you know that I commented on your journal. I don't know if you've seen it yet or anything but I think you should continue Hybrid. It's off to a relly nice start. =)

yaaay! :) gonna read right now. ahaha

i'm grateful for the add. :D keep up the good story writing. :D

Haha and your sister too? Haha right?

No way!!!! Same BIRTHDAY?!?!?!?! And VEGETARIANS?!?! :0 THAT'S SO COOL!!!!!! Haha man, are we kickass or what? Hahaha happy late bday! :D and no problem!! Hahaha I really like it :) hahaha

Ahh now I get it! Thank you for narrowing all this down for me. I read guides 3 and 4 and those helped me a lot. I really was confused about the whole every day everyday kinda thing. Thank you a lot.

Thank you for the comment. The story will be updated soon because the assignment's due on Monday. I'll be away over the week end, but I'll post the rest over the week.

Thank you very much dear!
But you narrowed it down perfectly thanks. I usually do the whole changing paragraphs after a description or whatever so it's fine now. But I do have another question if you don't mind. I researched but couldn't find an answer. So I was wondering what's the difference between her's and hers. I know it's not exactly the same thing as there's and here's or any other example considering you can't say "her is" or "her has". And also between ones and one's. Or even friends and friend's. I don't know if you get what I'm trying to say, lol, but if you do that's great. It always has been confusing.

Okay, that's great!

Oh, double verbs are like... "were walking" or "started blushing" etc.
If you look them up I'm sure you'll find out more, haha.

Hello, how are you?

Hey how are?
My name is Daylan
When you get the time come read my story I just put up its about me and my husband most true I also write poems
and if you have anything story's or poems you want me to read just let me know and I will be more then happy to do so thanks.

Haha, I know what you mean. I'm dreading school.

nice to meet you too. I love your avatar.

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Hello there and welcome to Mibba (: I'm Brittney.

Hey! Second comment! <3
I'm Sophie.
How are you?

hey there! let me be the first of probably many to comment rape! Welcome. And don't be afraid of the many comments that may pour into your profile. We Mibbians are very (intensly) friendly. mostly.