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  • Your.Desi.Girl

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    Yeah, he should have definitely gone about everything in a different way, but unfortunately he didn't and ended up screwing things up again. I think he has a real talent for that, aha.

    I wish I could tell you what's going to happen next, but I haven't written it and have no idea myself, but I can say that he's going to [try?] to fix it.

    And thanks for the advice. You're right and I do plan on trying to help him out in whatever way that I can.

    I'll get more up as soon as I get it written!
    October 10th, 2013 at 02:56pm
  • Your.Desi.Girl

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    Thanks doll, I appreciate it! I'm so happy to hear that you liked the first chapter and I am really hoping that i don't let you down with this one. I'm working on the next part so I'll get it up as soon as I can.
    September 30th, 2013 at 03:17pm
  • Your.Desi.Girl

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    Aha, yeah don't worry there is still more to come. I just hope that I still keep it interesting for you!
    September 24th, 2013 at 03:41am
  • Your.Desi.Girl

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    I'm glad that you liked it! Yeah, horror movie marathons are the best! I'll get more up soon!
    September 13th, 2013 at 03:32am
  • Your.Desi.Girl

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    Aha, I love how you say he deserved it, then quickly add that enough pain for him! Things are going to be a little smoother for him and Cole.

    Zee's got a plan and a few tricks up his sleeve. Not sure if will be a good one or a bad one, but it's still a plan none the less!

    I'll get more up ASAP!
    September 8th, 2013 at 05:37pm
  • Your.Desi.Girl

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    Happy ending, got it. I'm glad that you liked the update!
    September 4th, 2013 at 11:36pm
  • Carpe Diem !

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    They'll be back together eventually, I swear it <3
    April 30th, 2013 at 04:23am
  • Your.Desi.Girl

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    Don't worry, things will get better.... sooner or later...
    December 6th, 2012 at 05:18am
  • Your.Desi.Girl

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    Thanks hun, glad that you liked it! Again I am sorry about taking so long, but I'm working on he next one, so hopefully I can get it out soon
    December 1st, 2012 at 05:20pm
  • Carpe Diem !

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    Haha thank you for the comment on Natural Disaster!
    October 15th, 2012 at 04:41am
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    Thanks so much, glad you liked my story! :)
    August 7th, 2012 at 11:21pm
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    Haha, well I thought Lou would totally be sassy, even in the afterlife!
    August 7th, 2012 at 08:39pm
  • Carpe Diem !

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    Yay, i'm glad you liked it!
    August 5th, 2012 at 10:43pm
  • Your.Desi.Girl

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    lol, I love it when stuff like that happens! I'm gonna try to get something up soon for you and I'm sorry it's taking so long.
    January 24th, 2012 at 01:41am
  • Your.Desi.Girl

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    I'm sorry I've been MIA lately... the holidays have been kinda crazy.... I'll try to get something up soon! Again, so sorry!
    January 10th, 2012 at 02:27am
  • Your.Desi.Girl

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    I know, everything was awesome, then he just had to screw it all up... but do we really expect anything less from him at this point? I'll update soon!
    October 18th, 2011 at 01:29am
  • Your.Desi.Girl

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    Thanks hun, glad that you enjoyed it! THings will get a little better for them next chapter, only for ZV to screw it up once again... I'll update again soon.
    October 1st, 2011 at 05:37pm
  • Your.Desi.Girl

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    I would love for them to be happy and together again, but that's not gonna happen! Things will get better for them, but you're still gonna feel bad for Cole, with what she has to put up with.. I'll update again soon!
    September 26th, 2011 at 08:14am
  • Your.Desi.Girl

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    Yep, awkward was what I was going for, so I'm glad that I achieved it. I know, it was one of those things were you wanted then to be back together again happily, but it won't be that easy. There won't be a WWE smack-down next chapter between Cole and ZV's new girlfriend [sorry if that disappoints you!] b/c she's gonna be one who is more mentioned, not really seen.
    September 22nd, 2011 at 06:49pm
  • Your.Desi.Girl

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    Yeah, I know what you mean, and I agree completely! Dinner will be... awkward. Not too much drama happens, since it's mostly gonna be the strangeness since they're seeing each other again after so long. I'll update again soon!
    September 18th, 2011 at 01:37am