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  • loseriloveyou7

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    read my storyyy pLEASE. (:
    February 20th, 2011 at 09:09pm
  • emilyblg

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    omg i did?!? D: danggg lol. i kinda should have re read it more than once then =\ well thanks for commenting! lol:D
    February 19th, 2011 at 03:02am
  • vegas skies.

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    hey Sarah i just read your story and it's great! :D
    i love Taylor Swift, A-Dub, and All Time Low too lol
    February 14th, 2011 at 03:51pm
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    Awh Schweeeeet :)
    February 13th, 2011 at 04:13am
  • trisarahtops.

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    ... ... ...*SPAZZES OUT*
    February 13th, 2011 at 03:13am
  • boldasloveitself

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    Hey! I'm planning on putting up a new chapter tonight on the collab!
    February 8th, 2011 at 11:38pm
  • June Blossom 143

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    OK some1 just reported my "a line between us story" cause there were "Tags in the title"! but i don't know what that means! there is no "Tags in the title"! but now my story might get suspended! i know you guys can't help, but i had 2 tell some1!!!!!!!!!
    February 7th, 2011 at 02:27pm
  • gabytefel

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    Thank you so much! You have no idea how much that means to me!
    February 7th, 2011 at 04:11am
  • gabytefel

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    Omg you are amazing! Haha that's exactly the thing that becomes harder for me when I'm writing
    February 7th, 2011 at 04:03am
  • gabytefel

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    Thank you! Well I don't really know where my mistakes are actially, so do you know where they mainly are? If that makes sense
    February 7th, 2011 at 03:18am
  • gabytefel

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    Thank you so much for your criticism! It helped a lot! But the thing with the grammar is that my first language isn't english so my english grammar is not that good. But I will do my best to fix every mistake. Actually, if you could help me out with the grammar it would be amazing!
    February 7th, 2011 at 02:51am
  • iheartmusicx3

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    I'd love to check your new story out! (: I'll read it right after I post this comment! hahaha. Do you mind checking out my story too? I'd really appreciate it. :) Thanks!
    http://stories.mibba.com/read/352572/Thanks-For-The-Memories/
    February 7th, 2011 at 12:29am
  • fogbound.

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    yeah i love Allstar Weekend :) im actually seeing them in concert this month hahaha, but yeah id love to read it. Can you check out and comment on my story Novus? much appreciated!
    February 6th, 2011 at 08:11pm
  • June Blossom 143

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    oK! I posted chapter 2 of the line read it!
    February 6th, 2011 at 04:58pm
  • June Blossom 143

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    Sure I'll read it! It might take awhile though because I have 2 read like 4 others and I'm working on my stories. But I'll make sure to read it! OK?
    February 6th, 2011 at 03:51pm
  • alwaysallforyou

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    Sure, I will definitely read it!(:
    February 6th, 2011 at 07:52am
  • ee2010

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    hey, i just read your collab story and i really like it!
    i will definitely keep reading.
    and its funny because I am from a small town in Atlanta and would love to move to San Diego so its perfect!
    February 6th, 2011 at 05:03am
  • MegaStar1821

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    I love your stories SO MUCH! Will you please read mine? It's my 1st and I want to know what you think about it:)
    February 6th, 2011 at 04:39am
  • EarthToDestynee

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    Your chapter is really good. :) The only thing I would say is that you do the same thing I do sometimes, you used present tense to describe something in the one sentence then in the next sentence you used the past tense to describe it like it already happened, that's the only big thing I realized. :)
    February 6th, 2011 at 04:14am
  • gabytefel

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    Hey! I would love to read it! Thanks for telling me! But could you read mine too? LOL
    February 6th, 2011 at 03:25am
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