Thank you so much for the story comment on The Angel Of Vengeance, love. =) Never fear, an update is near...ish. Hopefully chapter one is just around the corner. Stay tuned!
Hey, im the one that commented on your post on yahooAnswers. Ive never been on this site before so idk how to use it, but you story was great! it drew my in right away and was very interesting! the action and detail was good. But the only slight thing that got me was this, "His hands reached for his machine gun and Jane shot at his arm, he gasped falling forward trying to load his machine gun while Jane ran off into an...." the only thing is, if he had a mashine gun, and told her to stop or else he would shoot, but she shot at him anyways, why did he need to load his gun? its a very good start to a story though! its deff. something i would read!!