Hey I was wondering if you could check out some of my poems (http://member.mibba.com/154066/poems/) and comment on them. :)))
I love hearing feedback and I'd love to hear yours((:
Ahhh thank you for the link, I've never really been too sure about what I was doing when it came to speech :D I generally just go: ooh, I haven't used a comma in a while *inserts comma* which is bad really :/ I never knew that you can't use hissed unless you have a 'ess' sounding word :O Again, thanks for the link and thanks for commenting :)))))) xx
Oh, thanks so much. :) I'm working on keeping the story going but there's been just so much shit in my life...like you wouldn't even believe. That's such a cliche statement but yeah. ><