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  • CharlieHunnam

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    see.. that's where my brilliant mind (sometimes) came into play. some of the ideas a freaking HORRIBLE, but the end.. is a doozy (sp?). i can't wait to write it!!
    April 2nd, 2012 at 05:15am
  • June Blossom 143

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    OH NO! :O
    April 2nd, 2012 at 04:54am
  • dawn of light

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    nah nah, i understand! ^.^
    April 1st, 2012 at 11:46pm
  • CharlieHunnam

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    i should be answering your question in the next chapter or two :)


    see, i wrote this story down like years ago, and it's so immature and crap, but i had some AMAZING ideas. I'm trying to re-write it and throw in stuff from the one i wrote, but make it more mature. like.. i think i had it so Dante couldn't touch her because she was married to Caleb or some crap.. i don't know. i was weird. anyway. yes, the beginning sucked. horribly. but that's life.

    more of what he intends to do is going to be in one of the next two chapters, promise (:
    April 1st, 2012 at 06:13am
  • June Blossom 143

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    Hey there. I just uploaded a one shot. It would mean a lot to me if you read it and comment! <3
    March 31st, 2012 at 09:40pm
  • dawn of light

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    New chapter of "You Taught Me a Lesson" (:

    Comments are lovey, so make my day <33
    March 31st, 2012 at 12:55pm
  • dawn of light

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    updated 'you taught me a lesson'! (:

    tell me whachuuu thought & comment! :D
    March 31st, 2012 at 01:42am
  • June Blossom 143

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    Thanks :)
    March 30th, 2012 at 06:03pm
  • dawn of light

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    I updated! (:
    March 30th, 2012 at 08:12am
  • CharlieHunnam

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    hahahaha well, you can always tell when my brain gets slow because the chapters get slow! hopefully i can keep that from happening. i guess that means it's time to change my music selection because i take a lot of inspiration from music. :D
    March 30th, 2012 at 05:24am
  • June Blossom 143

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    Please go read my journal it's very important! <3
    March 30th, 2012 at 05:22am
  • resplendent

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    NIA: I totally know what you mean. I've written short stories that I've wanted to make into long stories and make them perfect. I don't post them though...:)
    Mrs Love: hahaha I understand that too! You start writing and it ends up going somewhere you weren't expecting. I kind of like it because sometimes that's how I get over writers block:)
    and I know what you mean about comments! I mean honestly, what am I supposed to say to "Love it update!!!" for the four thousandth time.
    Maroon 5 is amazing:) and I actually don't know what channel the Voice is on. I've only seen a few episodes. But I love the whole concept of the show like how they can't see the person singing so they have to decide if they want them based on their voice. But I never have time to watch it, it comes on on Mondays and I'm always way busy on Mondays...so yeah.
    March 30th, 2012 at 01:59am
  • CharlieHunnam

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    hahaha yeah, i just got notification yesterday. i really appreciate it! i feel at times like it just sucks and it's not that good, but to be reviewed like that it really amps me up to finish writing it :D
    March 29th, 2012 at 07:39pm
  • CharlieHunnam

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    thank you so much for the review you did of "Your Guardian Angel"!! i really appreciate the time you took to read it & review it!
    March 29th, 2012 at 06:14am
  • June Blossom 143

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    OMG!!!!! I AM SOOOO SOOOO SOOO SORRY I HAVEN'T BEEN ON HERE IN FOREVER!!! MY SISTER'S POWER CORD FOR HER LAPTOP WASN'T WORKING (SO WE COULDN'T USE THE LAPTOP OR THE BATTERY WOULD DIE) SO WE HAD TO SEND IT OFF TO THE COMPANY TO GET IN FIXED AND IT TOOK FOREVER!! I AM SOOOO SOOOO SOOO SORRRY!!!!! TO MAKE IT UP I'M GONNA GO UPDATE "LOVE MESSES YOU UP" AND "SECRETS"! I AM SOOOO SOOOO SOOO SORRRY!!!!! :) :) <3 I AM SOOOO SOOOO SOOO SORRRY!!!!! <3
    March 29th, 2012 at 03:35am
  • louis tomlinson.

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    same here! it really stinks :(

    i'm almost done writing the first chapter, but i have the summary up and everything. it's pretty good so far :)

    oh my gosh, one time my characters decided to do that and they forgot the stinking condom, so we had to do a chapter listening to that stupid baby crying and we kept having to stop and feed it and burp it. ugh.
    March 25th, 2012 at 03:46am
  • louis tomlinson.

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    i'm so good at writing like perfect boyfriends, but then when it comes to finding them i stink :P

    oh i forgot to tell you that i started writing that story we were talking about before, "The Forever Alone Club," haha! :)

    my characters are just pains in my a-s-s-e-s, like omg.
    March 25th, 2012 at 03:22am
  • Britt_Murphs

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    Hey I know I've had so many contests that I never had time to go back and actually read the stories, etc but I finally found time for a contest so check out my Allstar Weekend Fan Fiction contest :D Prizes will be announced later on! http://www.mibba.com/forums/topic/174435/ :D
    March 22nd, 2012 at 11:10am
  • Shocking_Instability

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    March 20th, 2012 at 04:32am
  • Shocking_Instability

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    Thank you for your criticism! It helped a lot, and I'll try to be better :D Thank you for your comment and telling me I'm a good write :)
    March 20th, 2012 at 04:32am