The Fantasy / Comments

Okay... critiquing starts... now!!!!

I'm keeping it simple and gonna fill it with tons of links. lol

I need more readers, I'm desperate.

: P

That's fine. It's still your opinion, and it's more about your reading skills than your writing skills to critique someone's story.

I won't take it personal, I've been asking you what you've thought for weeks.

lol

<3

That is the sweetest thing ever. That nearly made me want to cry, that was so nice!!

Who was your friend that recommened it? because that in itself blows me away, that people are telling others.

Thank you so much for your kind words, they really make my day!

PLEASE critique it!!!

I need help!

Maybe not an [i]entire[/i] Christmas album...

But we could release singles.

I hate it when bands release Christmas albums.
I'm not sure why.

Wooo!

lol

Gerard likes Tatu.

There's a fanfic that I think you'd like.

It's called "It's Not The Life It Seems" and it's on the new stories list.

It's wonderful.

We'd be pretty rad if we were like Tatu, wouldn't we?

Wow. That would be fun.

If I was a senior...

*glares at establishment*

Did Tatu do that?

I want to... badly...

dammit.

It could work, if we were really dedicated...

I guess I could sing, work on my guitar.

You could practice your bass,

and i could tell my bro to make up some beats or die.

lol

We can try to do a duet kind of thing.

idk how that would work out though...

Oh, so no more brendan band?

I guess everything works out for a reason.

I can play the beginning of Brainstew by Green Day.

But that would be stealing...

>.<

I'm desperate for band mates

HxC

Okay, new subject.

I'm thinking about this band thing again.

I need instrument people.

Annnd.. I dunno what to do...

O_o Maybe... Their band director?

Or... Mr. Macy? The guy that started the Macy's store and parade?

Or maybe Abraham Lincoln just because he is Abraham Lincoln.

But he's named after Abraham in the Bible...

So that would mean he would have to worship TBPcover....

Because it came back just like Jebus...

Oh my, I'm confused.

YAY!

It came back from the dead... like-- like... JESUS!

ALL HAIL MOLLY'S MCR COVER!!!!!

Hi.

RIP Molly's MCR TBP album cover.

May it rest in peace.

lol. I wish I didn't have to do PE DX
I like sport out of school, but in school it sucks....*whispers* my PE teacher has a fat ass...its gross. DX
Baha. So how's your weekend been? ;D

Yum. XD
I'm in Australia so we don't have thanksgiving. But I get a week off school not next week but the week after 'cause I have a school band tour. Lame, but I miss out on PE with my bitch teacher for a whole week. :cassie:
XD

....No.

Well, technically, it is. My director didn't give me the solo, so I was all "umm why?"
and she was all "cause your voice is all weak and breathy and quiet."

And I was all *dies a little inside*
*walks away*
*wants to leave, but doesn't.*
*wants director to die*

*singsong-y voice*
Guuesss whhaaaat!

I updated Bobberrrrrt...

I guess if you want a great sex scene you should read it...

XDD

Sorry I didn't get to talk much on msn. I was like letting five million people use it and then I had to go away and then my uncle got drunk... so that was pretty funny... I had to watch that.