Hey :-) I just wanted to thank you for your comment on my story 'Broken' It's not as good as Mafia's Prisoner. That story I cherish very much-Broken was just a test in the water sorta speak; my detailing is a lot better in MP. Thank you so much again! I read the first chapter of your new story and I like how you can describe a scene, and the characters actions. It's a lot better than mine at times-bringing the scenes alive is probably one of the hardest things to do. Taking it from your mind to a pen.
July 14th, 2011 at 09:22am