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AngelsWickedScheme (100)

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Ah you just MUST finish "It's A War In Your Bedroom, Baby" ! I've fallen in love with it and can't get enough lol. It's been sooo long since you updated

December 24th, 2011 at 12:09am

Donatello:: (100)

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I stumbled over your profile and read your about, it's very interesting, but it's intelligence.

August 7th, 2011 at 12:49pm

AngelsWickedScheme (100)

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Hi I was wondering if you could check out my poems? And also at the moment I am attempting to write a story(true) and was wondering if you could check that out for me too? Comments are very much welcome !

Thanks!
xxxCharolette

July 31st, 2011 at 02:34am

AngelsWickedScheme (100)

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Omg Twilight is so stupid..I cant even..its just so..i dont know how we can call that literature to be honest lol. But yeah lucius...i could already sense this darkness around him. And i read a story once where the soul mate thing was from the point of view of the non vamp. How she hated it bc she didnt even liek the guy. She even described it as a form of torture.

July 22nd, 2011 at 02:21am

AngelsWickedScheme (100)

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Thanks for the comments btw lol. And honestly? So far everything is perfect in your book. Most other peoples i could at least think of some sort of fixing that needs to be done. But you are an amazing writer. And i dont know..i feel like my natural instict to give u ideas would be bad. Mainly bc of all the mainstream vampire things out there. I was wonder if you ever read about the soul mate principle though.

July 22nd, 2011 at 01:45am

AngelsWickedScheme (100)

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I actually really enjoyed that song. And i can def see the connection with the title. Actually, accoridng to my teachers my writing skills are amazing. But then again, they were all my fav teachers lol. So they were probably very bias to that opinion. Feel free to look at my poems and give feedback :D Oh and the further into this book, the more and more i become addicted to it lol.

July 22nd, 2011 at 12:27am

AngelsWickedScheme (100)

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Okay so I just have to say this one word:Addiction. I cannot get enough of your story "It's a war in your bedroom, baby." I have fallen in love <333 When i go to college in 2 years I want to major in English. I also read A LOT. Like crazy a lot. It's actually some what hard to find a good author on here. I myself write small poems. But they aren't quite there yet. Anyway, I just wanna say keep writing:P Possible as fast as you can? I am on the edge of my seat waiting for more !

July 21st, 2011 at 02:15am