That sounds like a very interesting story idea. Like all the things that Camie has been through during her tours, and what her relationship with the guys and Matt was like in highschool. I would read it. :)
yeah, my ex is in the National Guard (we still talk and are friends) and I've always kind of favored the Marines... not sure why haha. But yeah, I love your story, mostly because its just really different from the other ones you see on this site and its actually good too:D
well i kind of look up to you in a way. i know that i've never meant you before, but there's something about you that just screams leader and role model and really i'm glad that we stumbled across each other
that sound wonderful, i hope when i'm older i can find something like what you have. the two of you are so in love...i've never really seen anything like it or known anyone for real who has been that deep in
awe. i be the look on his face was priceless, i think it's cool that you're able to mix real life and fiction together and blend it so well that i can't tell which is which one.
I KNOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!! I beat Boomer with my shoe..... I was sooo pissed off! I'm getting my new laptop tomorrow and I'm going to see if Staples will transfer all of my stuff over to it. :)
Oh I totaly agree with you about them being good. It's a guilty pleasure of mine. You admire me? Why? Your story is relatable because it has real life in it. It's not cliched and it's honset, not just a fluff peice. And I will check out your other story. Think maybe you could read mine and tell me what you think? Their rough but I'm working on them.
Well i'm glad I can make you smile. I really do like how much love and emotion is in your story. It makes it more real and believeable. Even relatable. I made this account to read other stories mostly two but I ended up posting some of my writing on here. Im not sure what people think of it really but I keep writing anyway.I thought of joining the armed forces but I know I don't have the dicipline for it, but I have great respect for those that serve.
Well I think your story is just way more real than others and the whole baby thing is so over done but yours is a really original idea. I think its amazing that your writing the way you are. I figured the baby coment would be worth a good chuckle.
Oh ya it's definatly got all the facts. I think its a completely original idea for a fan-fic not one of those overly done "oh im having your baby" ones. I have nothing agains those either but I like that yours is original. I really do enjoy reading it and I am looking forward to a new chapter