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Thanks for your comment on Flash of Violet! :D I am really stoked you enjoyed reading it. lol I have trouble with the slang. I just feel like if I'm going to write in an accent, slang should be included and it's hard to use slang from another culture properly.
i once used knickers to talk about men's underwear. oops. >.< hahaha.
but thank you, really.

I absolutely love your one-shot Brand New. You captured the Weasley Twins perfectly. <3

heyy I have an a7x story up, Dirty Little Girl ft Matt and Brian, and I'd love for you to read and tell me what you think! I have Twilight, VD, Harry Potter and Original (etc) stories if those interest you more [: thank you!

Dirty Little Girl: http://stories.mibba.com/read/358646/Dirty-Little-Girl/

Yay! Im glad I could help, and I'm waiting patiently for more updates! And also, i love the title btw. Just sayin.

He's too adorable! I met him last september and I fell in love with him ever since,hahaha,he's just too cute :)
The update is already up, i hope you wont find it cliche,hahaha,and i already dropped a comment on your story
<3

Hi!
I wanted to say thank you for your comment on my story "Barriers"! :) it means a lot because not many people read it because God knows why, haha.
Thank you and i just had the idea of making Ariel as a daughter of somebody famous because it'd be a conflict in the story and would give Jonathan a hard time to get close to her ;)
but i hope you'd read it again and I'm going to post the update right now, so i hope you'll read it later on:)
<3

p.s i see you have a Jonathan story too,so imma check it out ;)

Hello there!
Sorry it took me a while to respond! I don't really go on mibba often cause im not subscribed to a lot of stories and the ones i am subscribed to are updated pretty sporadically, so yeah. Plus i hate browsing for new stories cause i can never find any good ones.
Anyway, you're welcome for the comment. To answer your questions, probably the easiest thing to do is employ the stream-of-consciousness technique. Just make sure the readers have access to the characters' thoughts and feelings - what goes on in their heads. You know how we all have little internal battles? Arguing over what to do or something along those lines? Have those internal dialogues on paper, so the readers can see what the characters are thinking. Also, just make the characters relatable to the audience but not typical - make them have their own unique quirks so that the readers don't forget them or confuse them with different characters from different stories. Make your characters unique, you know?
Sorry if this is too long, or boring or comes off as bossy or overbearing! I'm, by no means, an expert on writing, but yeah. Hope this helped! Also, waiting for updates on Mike!

I'm glad that I could make your night! I was just browsing in the stories and saw that your story was a Mike story. I haven't been able to find many stories about him, so I decided to give yours a shot and you didn't disappoint! :)

hi there!
thanks so much for the comment on my story Why Do I Put Myself In These Situations?
i'm really glad you liked it and thought that it was unique!
thanks so much for complimenting me!
it really means a lot to me as a writer! :)

You are very welcome.
Being a writer, I enjoy detailed comments more than just ones asking you to update.
So I try to always make mine detailed.

no prob :)
so how are u?

No problem, it's nice meeting you :)
- how are you?

no...when people say "hey, nice castle!" you lie, it's a castle, they exist to be claimed...now...nice castle!

Hey im sean welcome to mibba :)

Hey, I'm Megan :)

Welcome to Mibba! I'm Kelly. How are you?

heyy wuts up

no problem:) && you have a story up already?! wow, it took me like a month to post one on heree...i'm jellin':)

Welcome:)

Hey:)