Thanks for the story comment :p yeahhhh I deleted the whole lung cancer thing because I had NO IIDEA how to go from there. I thought about one of those hard crushing death scenes, but then I realized that that character was the narrator and I couldn't kill him off -.-" Fail on my part.
oh. was it the change of POV that was confusing? i didn't mention that each chapter is named after the apartment that it's set in, so the newest chapter usually won't be continuous with the previous.
thanks for commenting again <3