i dont want to be a loser but im starting my first story and i just posted the first chapter heres the link if you want to read it. its about JohnO
http://stories.mibba.com/read/361567/There-Was-Always-Something-More/
aw well just because your not getting comments doesnt mean you dont have readers. your stories are good and they prolly are all losers and dont know what to say. so dont stop just because of them your a good writer
you totally sounded like a commerical haha it was funny.
ohh i plan on reading it. its a good story.
hopefully not to many of the readers know about the video so they think you came up with the idea. haha.
but i cant wait til you update.
Ah!! Yes! I'm so excited!!
Drama?? Does it have to do with grandma menopause?(ha this is my secret nickname for her)
I love reading and it being so intense that I just want to skip to the end to find out what happens but I won't because I need to know every single detail.
Haha your story deserves all the comments!!!!!
I usually give detailed commers because A.I have nothing bettter to do. B.Generics don't help the writer at all beside telling them "good job" and C.I like lists as you can probably tell :)
Yes, now that I think about it I don't really see Jared as a girlfriend kinda guy. Pat not so much either. But I like that Pat dates around in your story. It's funny.
Haha sorry! I just love your story!! : ) and it's no problem, I completely understand. We just started school again this Tuesday and it is so exhausting and I have to stay after school for ap euro too. And just yesterday, I finished my hmwk at 145 am bc after school I had euro, then dance class, then a crazy load of homework for bio haha
But thanks for taking the time to respond to me though. That was very nice : )
Nice to meet you! And thank youuuu :D
I always get worried about that too! Haha I had a realllllly depressing section in one of my stories that I like hated writing and I was so scared to lose readers hahaha but nah you're story is the perfect balance