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  • The Shadowlands

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    Hi, this is Livvy, one of the authors from the story Take A Sad Song and Make It Better. I read your comment last night really late and I wanted to get up and dance like a maiac even though I was really tired because your comment made me that happy.

    Emily and I were talking after we had both read it and we both agreed that that was probably the best compliment we've ever gotten on this story. It really means a lo to us when people appreciate all the time and planning we spend putting into this story and, like you said, we don't want it to be one of thise stories where everything is completely random (though some of it is)

    Its reallly great how you understand literary devices because most people will comment saying, "Wow, I'm soconfused about what's gonna happen." but really we lay out all what's ging to happen with the amount of foreshadowing in the chapters. Emily and I get really excited when we use foreshadowing in the chapter because its super fun to play around with and trick people into a false security about what they think will happen

    Thanks for commenting and the next chapter will come shortly :) Don't worry. It gets really great from here on out.

    -Livvy
    February 7th, 2011 at 08:10pm
  • DeirdreMac123

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    thanks for the story comment!

    by the way, i love the beetles and chinese food too :D
    January 24th, 2011 at 12:20am
  • catinabottle

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    Thanks! And I'm gonna be writing like crazy to find out what happens next, honestly.
    August 17th, 2010 at 05:56pm
  • corrineftw.

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    Thank you so much for the story comment! It means so much to me that you took the time to read it and comment. I'm glad you like it :)
    August 12th, 2010 at 11:24pm
  • Not Active.

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    Hey! I know you read Secrets To Keep, so I wanted to see if you wanted to check out my new story. You don't have to, but I was just curious.

    http://stories.mibba.com/read/306057/The-Leaves-of-September/
    August 9th, 2010 at 03:54am
  • Not Active.

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    I just wanted to thank you so much for the story comment. :)
    July 30th, 2010 at 12:04am
  • DarkAngel666

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    Thank you so much for subscribing to Teacher's Embrace and I'm glad u r liking the whole plot, I thought I might have confused a few people but I'm glad I haven't. xoxo
    July 19th, 2010 at 03:09pm
  • London-to-Tokyo

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    Actually, I have lived in the US before, much like Olivia, so I have both american and british accents. To the Americans I sound really british, but every English person I meet askes me if i am from America as they pick up the accent. HAHA! I am stuck inbetween!
    Say just out of curiousity who would you want olive to get together with in the story?

    Your Mibbian Friend Maya
    May 27th, 2010 at 11:55am
  • London-to-Tokyo

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    glad of the request you seem really intresting by the look of your profile.
    May 26th, 2010 at 03:16am
  • London-to-Tokyo

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    You comment just cheered up my day so much, as fabulous comments tend to. I am glad you like the story so much and Olivia. Oh and the compliments were unbelievably great to hear, nice to know I am headed in the right direction. Thanks also for great feed back, will work on it,
    Maya!
    May 25th, 2010 at 06:04pm
  • Simply Mad

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    Thanks for the add! xD
    May 7th, 2010 at 11:21am
  • CoolWhip48

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    Thanks for the story comment! It really means a lot! I'll try to update really soon.
    April 27th, 2010 at 04:16am
  • Chill_Out_With_MCR

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    thanks for your great and blunt feedback XD
    But I mean, yeah, she IS related to the Gerard Way, frontman of MCR
    but thanks again for your comment, i will try to improve XD
    April 9th, 2010 at 07:59am
  • Maxxie?

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    Hi love :) I'm leaving mibba, so I'm going through all my friends, And adding them on msn/yahoo && facebook and shizz so we can stay in contact :D

    So add me if you have them :) my msn is : the-abnormal-1@hotmail.com
    Yahoooo: maxxies_with_spaceboy@yahoo.com
    August 4th, 2009 at 02:14pm
  • animal crackerz.

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    thanks for the story comment(:
    i love mcr tooo
    December 12th, 2008 at 12:58am
  • dead...without...you

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    hi there
    November 26th, 2008 at 03:40am
  • AOD

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    lmao
    i know, right? :P
    November 21st, 2008 at 02:43am
  • AOD

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    LOL
    i feel ya LOL
    i started having that problem but found time to work here when i stopped doing work for the asshole teachers that have problems with me and only did work for the nice ones :P
    November 16th, 2008 at 11:19am
  • AOD

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    LOL
    oh well, fame isnt everything, anywaaaays, whats been up haven't hollerd at cha fer a while now XDD
    November 10th, 2008 at 08:52am
  • AOD

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    XDDDDDDDD
    hiiiiii!!!!!!!
    what is up?
    ...dude how do i get more star things for my stories?
    November 7th, 2008 at 03:41am