Hi, this is Livvy, one of the authors from the story Take A Sad Song and Make It Better. I read your comment last night really late and I wanted to get up and dance like a maiac even though I was really tired because your comment made me that happy.
Emily and I were talking after we had both read it and we both agreed that that was probably the best compliment we've ever gotten on this story. It really means a lo to us when people appreciate all the time and planning we spend putting into this story and, like you said, we don't want it to be one of thise stories where everything is completely random (though some of it is)
Its reallly great how you understand literary devices because most people will comment saying, "Wow, I'm soconfused about what's gonna happen." but really we lay out all what's ging to happen with the amount of foreshadowing in the chapters. Emily and I get really excited when we use foreshadowing in the chapter because its super fun to play around with and trick people into a false security about what they think will happen
Thanks for commenting and the next chapter will come shortly :) Don't worry. It gets really great from here on out.
Thank you so much for subscribing to Teacher's Embrace and I'm glad u r liking the whole plot, I thought I might have confused a few people but I'm glad I haven't. xoxo
Actually, I have lived in the US before, much like Olivia, so I have both american and british accents. To the Americans I sound really british, but every English person I meet askes me if i am from America as they pick up the accent. HAHA! I am stuck inbetween!
Say just out of curiousity who would you want olive to get together with in the story?
You comment just cheered up my day so much, as fabulous comments tend to. I am glad you like the story so much and Olivia. Oh and the compliments were unbelievably great to hear, nice to know I am headed in the right direction. Thanks also for great feed back, will work on it,
Maya!
thanks for your great and blunt feedback XD
But I mean, yeah, she IS related to the Gerard Way, frontman of MCR
but thanks again for your comment, i will try to improve XD
LOL
i feel ya LOL
i started having that problem but found time to work here when i stopped doing work for the asshole teachers that have problems with me and only did work for the nice ones :P
Emily and I were talking after we had both read it and we both agreed that that was probably the best compliment we've ever gotten on this story. It really means a lo to us when people appreciate all the time and planning we spend putting into this story and, like you said, we don't want it to be one of thise stories where everything is completely random (though some of it is)
Its reallly great how you understand literary devices because most people will comment saying, "Wow, I'm soconfused about what's gonna happen." but really we lay out all what's ging to happen with the amount of foreshadowing in the chapters. Emily and I get really excited when we use foreshadowing in the chapter because its super fun to play around with and trick people into a false security about what they think will happen
Thanks for commenting and the next chapter will come shortly :) Don't worry. It gets really great from here on out.
-Livvy