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    Thanks for the comment! :D
    Yeah! I'm very grateful to her. Hero definitely needed some kryptonite. :D It also segways really nicely into a special twist I have in store. It's gonna be AWESOME.
    August 18th, 2011 at 06:36am
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    Thanks for the story comment! (: And sorry about my lack of updates, it's just I try to make the chapters long and I'm often busy.
    August 13th, 2011 at 03:50pm
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    Have you ever noticed how authors try to slip past their readers with subtle little hints about the pregnancy without trying to give it away? But the readers ALWAYS know. I thought I might have gotten away with it. Nope.
    August 13th, 2011 at 05:47am
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    :D thanks for the comment!
    Leviathan's female! Aknair called her 'she' at some point I think....

    Naw, Cleon's not faking. He genuinely can't use his magic. You'll see why at the end of the book. :)
    August 8th, 2011 at 06:27am
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    It's a DC (or was it Marvel....) comic turned into a movie. Like Spiderman/Superman/Batman movies. Only this is really dark and really deep. The plot is so complex and everything's interconnected, so much symbolism and good stuff. Hmm basically it's about a strange man in a mask running around and spiking a revolution against the totalitarian government. By chance, he saves a girl named Evey from thugs and things get going from there. It kind of reminds me of SuperHero in some aspects. :) WATCH IT! Really well made, too (directed by the wachowski brothers--the guys that created The Matrix).
    August 3rd, 2011 at 05:36pm
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    YAY! I'm so glad you liked it! I wrote about a page of it before getting frustrated and giving up, and then I rewatched the beginning of V for Vendetta and got hit with the idea for how the rest of it should go, and the wording of the speech at the end and everything. :)
    August 3rd, 2011 at 07:40am
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    xD Girl, I've been trying to think of that a proper way to word that for a year. It's NOT effortless.

    ;) I ain't tellin' you nuthin. Find all the clues and piece them together to see if she was right or wrong. Here I'll help you: anything AT ALL that gives you a weird feeling, like even if something seems just a bit off or strange and it doesn't add up with what's been going on, I'm dropping hints.
    August 2nd, 2011 at 11:56pm
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    Thanks so much for the comment! :D Lol, no, that's wrong. :P
    Hmmm. Let's put it this way. SuperHero is written to model a mask. What you're seeing on the surface isn't the same as what's really going on underneath, and what's really going on is hidden from sight. You can only see what's under the mask when you accept that the mask exists in the first place.

    .... I AM SO USING THAT QUOTE NOW.
    August 2nd, 2011 at 10:07pm
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    Yuppp. Damon's new bodyguard, so like the "evil supervillain" type. ~( " )~ I'm super excited.
    August 2nd, 2011 at 02:32am
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    Hahaha, yes quite off. :P

    Hmmm sneak peek: Hero gets an arch nemesis! >:)
    August 2nd, 2011 at 02:01am
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    I just burst out laughing at the irony of that comment. You'll understand when you read the new chapter. xD hahahaha.... Oh, that just made my day.
    August 1st, 2011 at 11:18pm
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    Thanks for commenting! :D
    A mob would be awesome. I'LL GET THE FLAMING PITCHFORKS.

    Working on the next SH chapter now. Just got a great idea for what to do with Sera in the story.
    August 1st, 2011 at 06:19pm
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    Thanks for the comment! :D

    Flynn actually started out being way too much like Joren's older brother, so I had to make Flynn even creepier. Thus, he hits on Annie. :)
    July 31st, 2011 at 03:45pm
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    Haha, maybe? :)
    July 30th, 2011 at 06:22pm
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    Aw, thanks for the comment! :D
    Lol, yeah I dunno what Darren was going to say. I assume it actually was "I'm sorry for everything." ;P he doesn't love her. yet. ....
    *evil laughter* MUAHAHAHAHAHAAA
    Okay, you can tell I just woke up. :)
    July 30th, 2011 at 03:23pm
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    Dude, sorry about the confusion :( The [i]Delilah[/i[, being a ship, can onyl reahc Texas, but Herrington (maybe I didn't mention this earlier) is supposed to be in California, in District 7. I hope I didn't confuse too many people...
    July 28th, 2011 at 04:04am
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    ....I don't know why it took me so long to notice, but I just read your signature thing on the comments. YOU ARE SUCH A DOLL, DO YOU KNOW THAT? That was too sweet of you to put me in!(: I apologize for my ignorance and not realizing it earlier. You are absolutely amazing [: So thankyuh lovely!(: & I hope you feel better! D:
    July 26th, 2011 at 04:25am
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    Me too! I'm going to end up merging two of them together, so I'm curious to see how that turns out... :{P
    July 23rd, 2011 at 08:53pm
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    Idk, Kairi's like me, so I guess she doesn't stick out as much as the rest of them do. :P

    Yup, Numare's not too old! And I lied, he doesn't have a girlfriend YET... I should get on that soon.
    Lina's awesome. She's super smart--like with an incredibly high IQ (if Altima had IQ tests). She'll be one of the main characters in the 3rd book.
    July 23rd, 2011 at 08:17pm
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    Yay, Cleon's #1! WOO

    See, Numare was SOO much cooler in the original version. Everyone that read TGR would always fawn over him. Unfortunately, I had to make some large cuts and those scenes didn't make it to this version ;_; I'll try to add them in again somewhere... but not sure how. He was playing with Kairi when she was 6 years old (which would make him 18 and totally HOT and awesome and funny and amazing). Oh, that reminds me.. I have to introduce his girlfriend into the story at some point....

    About Joren--naw, he's already a jerk. He just doesn't show it yet. Well, "jerk" isn't the right word. He... does bad things for good reasons. There we go. But the bad starts to overshadow the good as the series continues. :) That's Joren in a nutshell. He's like Darth Vader and Yoda mushed into a single person. Or hey, just say he's like Anikan. Right now he's like little kid Ani, then book 2 is like teenage Ani, and book 3 is like adult Ani.
    July 23rd, 2011 at 06:15am