please continue the story.
though you could check how it came out, before publishing?
"3 button" would have been "three muttons"?
also check the 'punctuations'?
aside from these kind of things,
I'd like to see where your characters are taking us.
on a final note, the 'format' of the story does make a difference.
The story comes scene by scene, just the way the characters tell me the events.
Thankies for the comment on "No Return".
Hope the poetic style is not getting in the way for you.
It's pretty much how I write the stories.
welcome to mibba. I know lame way to welcome and completely predictable. I hope you enjoy your time here at mibba. I was rather surprised at all the comments on my page my first day. Enjoy your reading and writting.