Abysmally Abstracted / Comments

Thanks for the story comment! (:

:D Thank you
I definitely will keep writing!;D

Yeah I read it :)
My city is safe because its surrounded by mountains and it's like 45 mins away from the ocean. The only problem where I live is random thunder in fall and spring. It's really weird. Like the thunder happens when it's not even raining and there is no lightening.

Yeah same here. You could wear coats and hats in the morning then for the rest of the day you can't wait to go home and change into a tahitt and shorts :( that's happened to me 3 days in a row already...

Do they tour? I live in California... Random: it's so hot outside I can't wait till winter! It's like fall never existed! :(

No.. Are they good? I like any kind of music but I kind of don't like all the cussing every other word like music nowadays. I'll check em out!

If I say one book is my favorite I feel like in cheating on the others

I actually don't like to start reading but when I start I can't stop :) it sounds like I'm talking about drugs :P smiley face
What's your favorite book?

It's so good like it sucks you in. I couldn't put the book down. And normally I hate books and I thought it would be a sucky book. Now I'm completely obsessed. I tell like everyone I meet that thy should read it.

Have you read the Hunger Games? You should; it's like the best book ever...
Haha sorry it was just something random

ha thanks! and yeah i love metal as a whole. but if you want to get down to specifics i love deathcore.

I so badly wish to have faithful followers ;ole you for my stories and poems ! Btw i wrote some new poems...will you check them out and give feedback again? I trust your opinions.

Thanks for the comment on my story. I put a summary so people would know. Hopefully you decide to keep reading.

And idk if you subscribed to my story but I'll tell you when i upload a new chapter. I'm actually doing that at the moment.

I LOVE your story. To be getting feedback from you is actually very good for my ego. And at that its all good ! You don;t even know how grateful for you taking time out and reading(and commenting) on all of my things. All of your comments will be taken into my review. And as for the story, it is all 100% true. I started out not thinking i'd put anything up here because i wasn't good enough. But now I realize that I must have some talent. And i never really thought that my writing woulf come across as dark or anything to anyone. To hear thta really helped me work past my doubts. Thank you so much .And I will tell you when my next poem goes up.

Hi I was wondering if you could check out my poems? And also at the moment I am attempting to write a story(true) and was wondering if you could check that out for me too? Comments are very much welcome !

Thanks!
xxxCharolette

Please do!

I'm afraid I'm going to have to disqualify your one shot. On the account of your layout not being with the standards of the contest and I don't have the time to read and review a 48 page one shot.

Okay so I absolutely LOVE your story Unwanted !!! Like I am on the edge of my seat-addicted to this lol. Uhm for story names maybe something like...When your deadly secrets save your life? Or desperation? I dont. To be honest i suck at names lol. But hopefully that helped a little? lol. Anyway keep on writing ! <3

Thank you for the comment on my book One of the Guys.
I do realize that some of it is kind of unrealistic and I have also noticed somethings that you pointed out.