Hey, thanks for the comment, and I totally understand what you mean, Comment Swap can give you some of the strangest things that you'd never think about reading, but that's okay. Thank you for pointing everything out, you're feedback is greatly appreciated! :)
Thanks for the comment on "Eponey - the Millenium Bug". I'm curious what prompted you to think it's not what you'd choose to read, as well as what made you change your mind, to enjoy the story. Hope you don't mind me asking. I've made some radical changes to the Prologue, you'd barely recognise it, I recon. partially, because I moved a large chunk of the text from the story, and placed it into the "Authors Note", where it felt more appropriate, to me. If you could point at something that felt fuzzy, or explain what is missing, it would help greatly. This is very interesting, you never know. This is a common problem, some say this, others say that. I'm not sure if this in particular have been changed, or improved over time, unlike the rules for how to spell words, which stillstand to be greately improved, in order to make sense. "Grammar Freaks", and Grammar-Nazies", guess they're basically one and all the same. a pain in the 'ass', which makes me happy I wasn't born an 'ass' *giggles* I love to hear a new/fresh perspective, never know what new or amusing insight they may bring. I had some literature in my early upbringing too, guess it made me come here, express myself in this story.
Thank you so much for your comment. I am in the process of writing the next chapter. It may be a while. Your comment made my day. <3 I am so glad you like it. :D
thank you for the story comment :) btw, most of it is accurate, as it is based on something that really did happen, the Third Serville War. A couple of characters are fictional, just to add some flavour to it.
Thanks for the story comment.
My friend CyanideLove and I just started one. It's called 'The Jetset Life Is Gonna Kill You'.
You can read it if you want.
There isn't Frerard in the first chapter, but there will be soon. :)