i hate Crosby becuz as i tell my cousin who is his biggestfan inthe world, hes a pansy ass dick head who is waaaay too full of himself...and cuz im sick of hearing everyone worshiping him...hockey is a team sport, not a solo one...just saying...and im 110% sure that ill love how u end ur story...for so far uve given me no reason not to :) feel free to check out any of my stories if u want...oh, and another reason i hate crosby: im a DIE HARD BRUINS FAN...liking crosby just doesnt fit into that picture...lol
I don't think it's confusing at all. You're doing a great job at showing that it's a flashback and when it's back in present time. I really do enjoy it and you can count on me to keep reading it =)
ahah! no I get it completely, that's happened to me before and I'm like 'oh, embarrassing...' I was just getting confused reading it lol :) great story though! x
it was a good, I knew it was coming. i really liked that though!!! sometimes i just know its coming, but than it never does. kind of like tv shows, you'd think that doing it enough would put you at some kind of risk, but than nothing since its tv