Oh, sorry for confusing you xD. It was definitely meant as a good thing, like, you used correct words for that era. :D And it was just something different from what I usually read, but I still liked it. Something fresh and lovely.:3
Most definitely expand it!! And if you ever need help...=]. I think it was really good. Some mistakes but they were minor. I love the time period its set in and I love Tokio Hotel. So when the two are thrown in together it makes it that much better=] haha.