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  • OnyxUrLuver

    OnyxUrLuver (100)

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    Like your sequel i was reading the description and was like whatttt ?
    so what happened to the baby ? why is she a hunter ? i actually got lost on the last three chapters mainly the last one
    July 25th, 2012 at 04:21am
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    I didn't like where the story was going with the baby so I changed it. It will make more sense when I post the sequel. Peter killed her parents because she wouldn't give the baby up at first and they were Argents. Derek was being Derek. I'm not sure what you want me to clarify. Could you give me some specifics? Or chapters to summarize?
    July 25th, 2012 at 02:14am
  • gimmeyomoney

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    Thanks for the add! Glad you like the story.
    May 31st, 2011 at 03:49am
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