Okay then. I can only assume your opinion on her will never change. That's a shame because I don't think Twelve is all bad. She was brainwashed after all...
Well I'm glad to see that you've given some thought to her. :) I kind of think Twelve is a bit of a complicated character. I'm actually developing what happened to her before BLI got to her. How her life was before she lost her memory of it. I wonder if people would be interested. It'd only be a short little thing like two or three chapters really...
First things first, thank you for the comment! :) I'm glad that you liked it!
In response to your comment:
1. Yes I do plan to incorporate the story some more now that they are back in Gotham. I just need to sit down and watch the movie again. Quick question, Do you know where in the storyline that I left off? lol I can't quite remember.
2. I would LOVE for you to send me a "BUTT-TON" of lyrics! I'm always looking for new lyrics because quite honestly, they're one of my biggest inspirations.
I'm glad you share my thoughts on haunted houses. :) Originally, I planned for them to go ape shit but I figured the craziness in the haunted house would make a nice diversion for them to escape.
Oh yeah, she's definitely known. It's more of a not wanting to face the truth and so she didn't say anything kind of thing. One of those stupid girl moments where she thinks that if she ignores it then it'll go away. But obviously it didn't go away and so she had to tell him. Eventually they'll talk about it. You'll see.
thank you for the story comment. i had a feeling readers would enjoy that chapter. i would kill her off, but i haven't decided if she's gonna play a bigger role yet. you'll know pretty soon after me. :)
Part of me wants to make a snarky sarcastic comment about 12 just to be a tool. Lol. But I'll refrain. I'm glad you liked the chapter! I don't think 12 is boring... but maybe I've just read the whole story. ;]
Oh, and as to the CC story... what do you mean by 'That's enough motive for me to not take her reaction at face-value'? Do you mean that you don't think she is engaged and is lying to CC for some reason or what? Glad you don't hate Helena though.
Awh, Twelve bores you? :/ Hopefully soon that'll change as she is my invention. Although I could see that people would take to Sands a lot better than Twelve, being Twelve is an outsider and all...
Thanks for the comment though!!
Yes the main reason is going to be revealed later but a fraction of it was fear that anything she knew about BL/ind was would make them wonder. She just wanted to keep her main secret under wraps so desperately.
Glad you liked our first little twist. :]
The reason for the 'unmasking as the final fall' being kept secret is coming. That's one of the few details we've got to tweak in the story. And consequently why we'll only be posting once a week from now on. But hey, the story'll only get better/more twisted.
Haha I didn't think you could like my story that much. And I much prefer the book to the show. Funny thing is I originally didn't even watch the show for like a month because Elena wasn't blonde or blue-eyed lol. But it eventually lured me in :)
I like it, I just wish I could have done a better job on the face is all. Somehow something got smeared and I couldn't fix it. One day I might get around to fixing it. :) Cassie loves it and that's all that matters since I did it for her.
...Nah, that wasn't really a spoiler if you already were thinking like that. ;)