Thankyou imjustinlove, I really appreciate the feedback, and don't worry I know my writing skills weren't the greatest at the beginning of the story but I'm starting to edit each chapter right now because I feel that I haven't portrayed Sebastian's character that way that I initially wanted to so I might change and add some new things. Hopefully you will like them! Thanks again =D
March 3rd, 2012 at 08:16am