I know, I love it when someone else can read it before I post it to find those silly ones that I miss. Sometimes, it just all blurs into correct writing because I've seen it so many times, but in reality, there are mistakes.
Oh, that's a shame (for me haha). I'm too addicted to your story. And with a cliffhanger like that, I dunno if I can wait that long! I'm sure you'll have fun at the wedding though, and you never know, might get inspiration for a scene or something!
That's good. I hope I don't sound lame or anything saying that I like it so much lol it is really nice to look at, and good that I can have such a clear picture in my mind of the characters without having to open up a separate tab for the characters or something. :)
No problem :) I'll be commenting for each update I read, if I continue to like (and therefore read) your story, and hopefully I'll be able to give some sort of feedback along the way too :)
I'm glad you liked the update :D
I'm trying to get back into writing but October is probably the busiest month for me since my job is halloween related but I'm working on it!
I'm glad you Running With Wolves. I'm sort of in love with the storyline myself (I dont know if that makes me sound conceited?) but I was worried no one would be interested because in a way its just so terribly cliche. I'm writing the next chapter now, my only problem is that I come up with a really great scenario that'll happen in like five chapters, write it, then write three chapters following it and then have this gap from chapter 4 to 9 haha.
Thank you for the comment, I love feedback.
I meant to get the chapter out sooner but I've been a little busy and trying to write two other stories at the same time x] hopefully i'll have another chapter out at the end of next week =]