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  • artistvs.poet99

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    no problem !! :)
    February 6th, 2011 at 04:40am
  • OliveJuice

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    Of course I will! :)
    Once I get some free time on hand I'll read some chapters and give you my thoughts (if needed...who knows, I might get through the whole story with no criticism! In that case, I'll tell you anyway, haha). I'm glad you appreciated my comment...There are so many people on Mibba (and other writing sites) who will read anything, and say that it's fantastic even if the writing is horribly sketchy, just because they get caught in the plot. I try to both motivate and help the writer. I'll do my best for you :D.
    January 20th, 2011 at 11:27pm
  • tigermilk

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    it's o.k. I don't really read stories like it very often, you see :)
    January 18th, 2011 at 01:55am
  • tigermilk

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    o.k, sorry if I've been a pain :)
    January 18th, 2011 at 01:32am
  • tigermilk

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    you could add a suffix to it, like Gavina or something. that's what the Romans did, changing masculine names to feminine ones by replacing the "us" with "a"... Claudius, Claudia etc,
    January 18th, 2011 at 12:52am
  • tigermilk

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    I'm just making you aware of the fact that it's a MASCULINE name...

    http://www.bounty.com/baby-names/names/gavin
    http://babynamesworld.parentsconnect.com/meaning_of_Gavin.html

    name your next protagonist Gregory or Brian if you like. it maks no difference to me, I was only politely pointing it out in case you didn't know.
    January 17th, 2011 at 09:50pm
  • tigermilk

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    that's fine, if you want to make your readers think you're writing about a hulking great pervy builder instead of a teenage girl.
    January 17th, 2011 at 09:04pm
  • TwitchyGiggles13

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    haha okay :)
    January 17th, 2011 at 09:07am
  • TwitchyGiggles13

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    haha i dont have any ideas really either sorry haha
    January 9th, 2011 at 04:58am
  • iFeel.Like.A.Monster

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    :)

    So your learning to play the guitar? I'm learning the bass guitar.
    January 5th, 2011 at 04:30am
  • iFeel.Like.A.Monster

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    OMG! No one has welcomeed you yet!

    Well....

    Wellkey!! To Mibba, The World of Young Writers!
    I'm Karli aka THE_MoJo

    *Comment Virginty stolen my moi! Muaahahahahhaha!*
    January 5th, 2011 at 03:58am
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