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  • pink tape

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    Thank you for the comments.
    December 24th, 2012 at 03:18pm
  • lollipopemily

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    hey :)
    December 11th, 2012 at 01:35am
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    Hey :)
    December 8th, 2012 at 08:45pm
  • lollipopemily

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    lemme know when that chapter is done so i can read it! :)
    December 6th, 2012 at 10:07pm
  • lollipopemily

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    okay, gimmie some ideas and let's maybe do the motionless in white one since there is only one chapter we can take it anywhere we want. :)
    December 6th, 2012 at 09:22pm
  • lollipopemily

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    I wrote every chapter so far for the Ben Bruce story. I was hoping you could think of where to go next with it and write the next chapter
    December 6th, 2012 at 09:09pm
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    hey! :)
    December 6th, 2012 at 09:03pm
  • lollipopemily

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    okay, then i can see what i can come up with for the next chapter after. :)
    December 5th, 2012 at 01:06am
  • lollipopemily

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    How about my Ben Bruce one? You can do the next chapter. :)
    December 5th, 2012 at 12:53am
  • lollipopemily

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    Well, the Asking Alexandria one has more written in it. The Motionless in White one only has one chapter so far.
    December 5th, 2012 at 12:50am
  • lollipopemily

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    Thanks! I'd like some help with the ones i started. I'm stuck. Can you help with those?
    December 5th, 2012 at 12:43am
  • AHLICE

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    Thanks for the comment on Corsets & Garterbelts. I don't really like giving out information that I hope the readers would understand by reading, but just a heads-up that at this point in the story, they've never had a sexual relationship yet. Hope that clears things up~
    September 26th, 2012 at 01:53am
  • The Authoress

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    Hi :) I was wondering if you made the layout on your story "Love the way you lie"... how did you round off the title background? thanks :)
    August 12th, 2012 at 05:42am
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    Thank you for your comment on my story! c:
    I was actually hoping somebody would be more on Nash's side because I feel like if I was a reader, I'd think the same thing. :b
    July 31st, 2012 at 09:56pm
  • lollipopemily

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    Major writer's block with this story right now. I need help.
    July 30th, 2012 at 06:04pm
  • ladyschrei

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    Thank you for the story comment. I really appreciate it :)
    July 30th, 2012 at 05:12am
  • jewelia.

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    Aw, well, I'm glad you took it well. It gets a little frustrating sometimes when I try to help people and all I get are defensive comebacks. X3

    Well, by a beta, I mean a user who helps you with all things that need improving. Most people consider it to just be proofreading with grammar and such, which is fine--but betas also help with descriptions, sentence structures, plot and character development, etc.

    I would be happy to help you. Mr. Green
    July 30th, 2012 at 04:59am
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    Aw, well, I'm glad you took it well. It gets a little frustrating sometimes when I try to help people and all I get are defensive comebacks. X3

    Well, by a beta, I mean a user who helps you with all things that need improving. Most people consider it to just be proofreading with grammar and such, which is fine--but betas also help with descriptions, sentence structures, plot and character development, etc.

    I would be happy to help you. Mr. Green
    July 30th, 2012 at 04:57am
  • jewelia.

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    Thank you for your comment on Project 27. :) And I normally just search for black dividers on Google images. xD
    July 30th, 2012 at 03:50am
  • Average Lifesaver;;

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    Bahaha, thanks for the comment on my tutorial! Glad it was helpful(:
    July 25th, 2012 at 12:11am