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Oh gee. Super exciting. ***insert sarcasm here***

I know you can't rush genius, blah blah blah, but no new poems yet? =(

thank you

I have a poem too LOL (:
Hi im Bebe

Any time!!! What can I say, I read what I like and I like what I read. And as to my poems, I'm not one of those people who demands you comment if I comment on your stuff. Don't worry if you don't read them because I won't get all offended haha

Yeah it really does

Thank you for commenting on my poem. My friend made me write when i was going through a tough time. She said it helps her so i thought why not

Cheers :)

i have not but since you have mentioned it i defffinately willll (:

Hey, Im Jaimie.
Welcome to Mibba
Always wanting to talk.
Maybe we should?

Wow. I finally finished and to be honest, I'm kind of blown away.

Thanks so much for the comment! And advice :)

Oh, no offence taken :) Maybe it just reads weirdly to me, but it really does seem that the tense changes in this stanza:
she's sitting two tables across from him

a wink and a nod from the boy

silhouetted now by ceiling fan fixtures

she ambled elegantly towards him

And continues in the different tense for the rest of the poem.

Haha, and nice comment on my photo. :)

That's really cool. I hadn't realized that the syllables had such an effect on the way it's read, though now that you've explained it, it does make sense. But... yeah. That's kind of awesome. :) Literature Major... that would explain the knowledge.

Which classes do you have to take for a Literature major?

Thanks! I enjoy your poems too!

Thanks. You seem to know a lot about poetry, or you at least look more closely at it all in general than most people. That's pretty cool.

So, I guess rhythm and structure kind of go hand in hand, in a way? Your rhythm, I noticed, is excellent. It makes everything much more pleasant to read, whether you're looking at rhyme schemes or not. A lot of people tend to mess up rhythms a bit, but you seem pretty steady with a good rhythm.

Alright, I see where you're coming from, too. You make a very good point. I guess it really all does boil down to personal ways. Because, I know it's a public site, I'm just more... conservative, I guess, as far as wanting everyone to be kept up as long as they can.

Thank you very much for reading some of my work, and for the comments. I do appreciate it, and honestly, I'm impressed you paid so much attention to Halls of Holly and Pine. I don't think anyone has taken notice of my rhyming scheme and syllable structure before. :) Thank you. And I don't plan my rhyme schemes, but that would be a fun idea.

Not yet, but I'll start in a while after I get one of the new users I'm friends with situated.

Wow.


So. You're a really incredible writer, and for the record, I've been telling some of my friends on here about your work and they seem to really like it too.