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Does this paragraph engage you? Please be honesst!There was something about her glowing ivory skin that made me jealous; something about her long-legged strut in those black peep toe pumps that made me want to stick her foot in acid and watch her flesh burn away until there was only white shiny bone and sizzling pink raw skin; something about her perfectly conditioned blond curls that made me want...
October 17th, 2009 at 03:49am