Hahh, thankks for the story comment . =]
I'll try to updatee ,but I've got to writee two one shots for contests ,
so I don't know . x\
But I'll try . (:
Thanks for the story comment!
And for your question.. Well the
story started as a oneshot in my
head but I later added two more
chapters that I decided to delete.
They weren`t as good as I had
hoped. So yea.. He.he.
(=
Thankkks for the story comment . =)
I'm going to try & update today , but I've been having
a troublesomee time with what should happen next . Hahaa .x]
Aw, that stinks about your paper. Yeah, I'm not too great in grammar either, but I've been working on it. I saw you fixed up the summary and it looks pretty good. Chapter two looks a lot better, grammar wise. Yeah, I was just wondering if it helped...I'm glad it did. Don't worry about reading anything from me. If you ever get bored you can XD
Wow, I couldn't help but notice that we're like really alike. I love music, I love being Italian, I hate Math (A LOT), Basketball is my all time favorite sport, and I hate smoking. :3 =] <3 <3 <3
Ah, thanks so much for the wonderful comment! It really made my day :]
We should chat more often about writing stuff. I can lend you a hand anyday you'd like, and I know I always need feedback on my stuff (I LOVE editing, and improving on my postings)!
I don't really have anything posted thats quite like Lemons. I'm thinking I may post more of my school work essays (thats what Lemons was), because I really get going on some of those prompts. I have two other stories, but they're a little different. If you're bored, you could give them a read, I dunno if they'll be your cup of tea. Hit or miss with them xP
I'll be more than glad to review your story...just not today because it is midnight over here. So tomorrow, I'll review it. I like reviewing stories XD