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  • not here anymore

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    Hey, so I thought I should tell you that Ch. 8 of Inside You, Inside Me is posted and you should totally read it. :D
    November 23rd, 2009 at 12:18am
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    Thanks for the journal comment. :) My headache went away. :)
    October 17th, 2009 at 02:57pm
  • jul!zzl3

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    thank you for the joint story comment (:
    August 25th, 2009 at 03:09am
  • red hands.

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    Hahh, thankks for the story comment . =]
    I'll try to updatee ,but I've got to writee two one shots for contests ,
    so I don't know . x\
    But I'll try . (:
    August 1st, 2009 at 05:36am
  • not here anymore

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    I updated Inside You, Inside Me. :]
    July 24th, 2009 at 10:24pm
  • red hands.

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    Heheee, thankks for the story comment (:
    Gehh, I shall try to updatee as soon as possible .
    July 23rd, 2009 at 05:52am
  • JIMMY_ColorEd_CrAyOn

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    thank you for the story comment! it made my day!
    July 22nd, 2009 at 03:11am
  • H. S.

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    Thanks for the other stroy comment.
    Just read them.. hehe.
    =]
    July 11th, 2009 at 02:37am
  • H. S.

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    Thanks for the story comment!
    And for your question.. Well the
    story started as a oneshot in my
    head but I later added two more
    chapters that I decided to delete.
    They weren`t as good as I had
    hoped. So yea.. He.he.
    (=
    July 11th, 2009 at 02:21am
  • red hands.

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    Thankkks for the story comment . =)
    I'm going to try & update today , but I've been having
    a troublesomee time with what should happen next . Hahaa .x]
    July 4th, 2009 at 10:34pm
  • Jimmy Novak

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    Haha, Okay. it's around 1:00 here too....anyway thanks for trying to read my stories, I hope you don't fall asleep from boredom! :3 =] <3 <3 <3
    July 4th, 2009 at 07:09am
  • Miss Authoress

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    Aw, that stinks about your paper. Yeah, I'm not too great in grammar either, but I've been working on it. I saw you fixed up the summary and it looks pretty good. Chapter two looks a lot better, grammar wise. Yeah, I was just wondering if it helped...I'm glad it did. Don't worry about reading anything from me. If you ever get bored you can XD
    July 4th, 2009 at 06:53am
  • red hands.

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    Heheee, that's okayy . (:
    Thankkks ! I hopee you like it .
    July 4th, 2009 at 06:49am
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    Heheee, which ever youu prefer . x]
    Misperception is the one I'm currently workingg on ,
    but all the others are finished . (:
    July 4th, 2009 at 06:36am
  • Jimmy Novak

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    Wow, I couldn't help but notice that we're like really alike. I love music, I love being Italian, I hate Math (A LOT), Basketball is my all time favorite sport, and I hate smoking. :3 =] <3 <3 <3
    July 4th, 2009 at 06:31am
  • Miss Authoress

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    I was wondering if you read my review and if it helped. I hoped it helped :-\
    July 4th, 2009 at 06:20am
  • Sick Boy.

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    Ah, thanks so much for the wonderful comment! It really made my day :]
    We should chat more often about writing stuff. I can lend you a hand anyday you'd like, and I know I always need feedback on my stuff (I LOVE editing, and improving on my postings)!

    I don't really have anything posted thats quite like Lemons. I'm thinking I may post more of my school work essays (thats what Lemons was), because I really get going on some of those prompts. I have two other stories, but they're a little different. If you're bored, you could give them a read, I dunno if they'll be your cup of tea. Hit or miss with them xP
    July 2nd, 2009 at 08:10pm
  • Miss Authoress

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    I reviewed your story, hope I was helpful.
    July 2nd, 2009 at 07:53pm
  • Doctor

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    Thanks for the poem comments
    July 2nd, 2009 at 08:29am
  • Miss Authoress

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    I'll be more than glad to review your story...just not today because it is midnight over here. So tomorrow, I'll review it. I like reviewing stories XD
    July 2nd, 2009 at 06:24am