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I was flipping through the comments on my Story Don't Let These Boots Fool You and just wanted to say thanks again for your comments and hope that you're still reading it and still loving it.
-S

It's so true! And I stupidly decided to choose really boring subjects at college, so now I'm stuck doing maths and history which i thought I liked, but have discovered that I do not XD Psychology and English are cool though, but we never get to write creatively in English, it's always 'analyse this, write an essay' blah blah blah so I always feel like school just numbs my creativity with mindless, tedious work XD But it's almost over, which means my brain has come alive. Wooo! XD

Thank you for your comment on Don't Let Me Go.
I'm really gladd you enjoyed it.
The ending was kinda rushed, i know. By then i coudlnt think of a way to finish it.
I'm definately considering going back and changing it into maybe a Two-Shot, based on the comments.
other than that, i'm glad you enjoyed it (:

Ah thank you! I wouldn't start writing until my college is over for the summer but if I do it that gives me some time to plan. I couldn't sleep last might because of the sudden influx of character/plot ideas XD I'll let you know if I do =D I'm Mel by the way :)

Ahaha sign of a good writer when people can tell you've based a character on them XD I feel all inspired to write my own killjoy fanfic now, I've got plenty of nutters for friends who could pass as Killjoys I think XD

Aw it's great when you can base a character off of someone you know, they're always more realistic I think. I could really picture him in your description of him, the bit about being a punk who ditched the make up when he got older and moved to a ranch was hilarious XD Have you told your friend that this is how you envision him in the future? XD

Ahh cool! Honestly I really can't wait to see more of him, I often find myself loving the side characters more than the main ones XD

Thank you for your comment on Blind Photographs! I always imagined Radio as sort of Photo's conscience, but she's really not a very good one. It's more like the devil-on-your-shoulder kind of deal, I suppose =)

Well, like I said, there will be dialogue next chapter! When it comes to Eden and Cassie, they communicate silently but that will change in time, I promise. But I understand what you mean completely. I've always felt the same. (:

Thank you for the story comment! It was so lovely. <3

As for the comment about the dialogue, I'm getting there, heh. I know it's a bit hard to get through. I'm not sure if it'll help, but there will be more dialogue in the upcoming chapter. Not between Eden and Cassie, but between Cassie and someone else. It'll help! I really am sorry if it feels boring or whatnot without the dialogue, though. I was kinda worried about that.

Thank you for taking the time to read and comment on Loverboy :)

Thank you for the comment on Don't Let These Boots Fool You. Thank you for what you said about my writing i'm always afraid I don't measure up to the other excellent writers on here and often slack on writing my stories. I hope you like the chapters to come you never know there might be another one later today or tomorrow.
-s

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ellipsis_(narrative_device) I'm assuming that's correct? I don't think my story has any of that. O_O

I understand there's no redeeming quality of Victoria in Beautiful Barbie, but her character is a necessary for the plot in the future. And as for eslipses I have no idea what you're meaning, so uh. O_O Yeah. I did however google it, but it uh... Still made no sense to me. O_O Sorry.

I've read The Host. It's one of my favorites :) Thanks for your thoughtful comment. I'm glad you like my story!

no, you arent allowed to give it up! who cares about feedback! i love it and thats all that matters. most of the time im a silent reader unless i come by a story that is simply awesome, like yours. im sure you have a lot more people loving this story than you think :)

Okeeee, I read your story and now you like Fahrenheit 451... and your username is from THE SHARPEST LIVES, which is my favorite song EVER... so, basically, I love you.

(Actually, right now, it's tied with Hang 'Em High and Predators in a Maze. But whatever.)

oh, a farm town?

ahh. i remember wearing this loud jester's hat at a university on a farm town. stares all around. like, scandalized.

so, yeah, i can imagine the looks you might be getting from them. lol.

ah...
i guess its pretty much like having braces...lol.

i'm sure you'll eventually get used to it.

and lower lip piercings are better than upper lip studs. hm hm.

well, that depends on where in the lip the piercing is.

hehe. i only got as far as piercing me left ear...