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  • Jaguar's Heart

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    That would be nice.

    I just don't want it to offend anyone. Especially those who were affected that day.
    January 23rd, 2011 at 08:13am
  • Jaguar's Heart

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    Thank you. I was worried about writing Christina's parts because I've never met her, but everything I've read about her says she was a sweet, thoughtful, mature 9 year old.

    Everything about that day is horrible. I just hope my story doesn't make it worse.
    January 23rd, 2011 at 07:53am
  • Jaguar's Heart

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    Thank you so much for reading that!

    I really appreciate it. (I always tell you that, huh? lol)

    I had wanted to write something about that day since it happened and when I heard the song it brought the story into focus.

    If that makes any sense at all XD
    January 23rd, 2011 at 07:47am
  • Jaguar's Heart

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    Hey, could you proofread So Die Alone for me please? Thank you!
    January 15th, 2011 at 07:21am
  • Jaguar's Heart

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    Lol, you can read The Birthmark if you want.

    No biggie though, since I'm the only one who actually entered a story in that contest.

    Now I'm just going to make it a chaptered story.

    So you can read it if you want, or, since I know how you feel about long stories, you don't have to.

    It's totally up to you.

    Oh and thanks for the request! I'll totally be your friend! I love friends!
    January 5th, 2011 at 07:07am
  • silk tea.

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    Thank you. :)

    But yeah, that makes sense. When you read the story though like it's a legit race. Like she had to be turned to be a Slayer, like a blood-bonding thing, her sister got it too. Etc.
    January 5th, 2011 at 05:37am
  • silk tea.

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    Thanks for the comment on my summary in that thread.

    I just wanted to say that I know it sounds like it sort of but Slayers in this story are a species not a person who was just kind of dedicated to killing off vampires. and Slayers aren't hte only things that hunt down the creatures in my story--every creature in it does aside from werewolves. :)
    January 4th, 2011 at 08:28pm
  • Jaguar's Heart

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    If you do make another let me know! I want to read it!
    January 1st, 2011 at 07:35pm
  • dressedtokill

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    This is a total creeper but when i saw your farewell fighter icon i like had a spaz attack cause i was listening to the hahahaha
    December 31st, 2010 at 07:42am
  • Jaguar's Heart

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    Just wanted to let you know I finally found the thread and I love the summary you came up with!

    Thank you so much!
    December 31st, 2010 at 07:30am
  • occulta.

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    Arms Thanks for the drabble comment. I truly appreciate it. ~ <3
    December 31st, 2010 at 02:39am
  • Jaguar's Heart

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    Sweet! All chapters are up!
    December 29th, 2010 at 06:58am
  • Jaguar's Heart

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    Yeah, I'm working on the last chapter now, so there's only four of 'em.

    Is that length okay?
    December 29th, 2010 at 02:29am
  • Jaguar's Heart

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    Lol, I had been wanting to do a dino story for a while when I ran into that contest. I had a lot of fun writing it. I may do a sequel and show if Nate takes her back or not...

    Oh, and I was wondering if you could actually edit a story for me...?

    It's for a contest and not finished yet, but it wont be over 5 chapters! I promise!

    If not that's okay, but you're really good at catching my uh ohs...

    It's called The Dream.
    December 28th, 2010 at 05:13pm
  • Jaguar's Heart

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    Thanks! I appreciate all your help with the typos.

    I end up missing them 'cause when I read it over I know what it should say and it screws me up.

    Oh, and I was wondering where you saw my story/signature since I finished that story a while ago...?
    December 28th, 2010 at 07:34am
  • Jaguar's Heart

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    Lol, thanks!

    Yeah... stupid typos... *runs to quickly change it before anyone else notices*

    And I hope you like the rest of the story...

    There's one part in it that kind of doesn't fit... but then again does....

    Hopefully it'll all make sense at the end!
    December 28th, 2010 at 12:01am
  • Spread-the-Rumors

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    Thanks for the comment : ) Glad you enjoy it so far.
    December 4th, 2010 at 08:38am
  • Crookshanks

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    Thanks for the story comments! I really appreciate you taking the time to tell me what you think. :)
    November 28th, 2010 at 11:56pm
  • Dimethyltryptamine

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    Hehe. Thank you for the story comment!
    I love lengthy reviews.
    Thank you so much for that mistake-catch! xD I'm guessing it was a typing error (The 'D' key is right beside the 'S'). It was supposed to be 'kisses' not 'kissed'.
    Thanks again for reading and commenting. :3
    November 28th, 2010 at 09:47pm
  • the pusher.

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    http://stories.mibba.com/read/338649/Dont-You-Think-She-Looks-Tired/
    I finished your Doctor Who gift fic. [:
    I really hope you enjoy it!
    November 27th, 2010 at 04:47am