Thank you so much for your lovely comment on Tommy Guns & Stolen Kisses, it made my day! Also yes, the first chapter is entirely dialogue. It's an experiment I've been trying.
I loved Let It Be Me and I'm kinda excited to get my internet back so I can catch up on Glee. I started watching it around the part I described then kicked it back up right when my internet got shut off.
Your work shows for New Perspective because it's absolutely wonderful. I'm sad that it won't continue but I can deal with that
No problem! I really enjoyed it, you did a really good job! Oh man, I'm totally into it. When I studied abroad, me and 2 of my other flatmates would sit and watch alien documentaries almost every weekend.
Thank you for the comment on 'You're My Way home...' :)
Ah, yes there is a few missed words in that paragraph. The first half of this story was written for NoNaWriMo so it was done fast and I had a problem with my word program at the time, it kept cutting out random words. I thought I fixed most of that, sorry. It was meant to be: 'On the bus it was pretty rare to find the back lounge empty, even when the bus was parked. So the moment that Brendon walked in and find the room still, he quickly dashed back to his bunk and pulled out a shopping bag that had been hidden there at least a week, maybe two.' As for the typos, I'd admit I'm not that good with spelling or grammar and it was written fast NoNaWriMo so the start of the story will have a lot that I accidently missed when I quickly edited it myself. I don't have any friends that can help edit things anymore and I do tend to miss things. Thanks for letting me know!
You're almost close with the language, it's Australian English. I did try to keep it authentic, like I usually do but I let it slip when I started keeping the narrative in Australian English mostly because I haven't written anything is years where I didn't change it into American or worldwide type of English. For a while I wasn't sure I'd post the story at all, so I never fixed that.
Thanks for taking the time to read those three chapters and leaving the comment. If you do decide to read on I hope you enjoy and that you like it. Thank you!
Your story is up next for the Leave a Comment, Take a Comment, but I need an cover image to post up on the My Mibba page. Please link me to one ASAP (you can send me a PM or drop it on my profile.