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  • EmiR

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    No. You do not give away the basic plot of a story in chapter one. Improvise! ;D
    April 2nd, 2011 at 12:17pm
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    Haha, definitely. I remember being 13. Awesome times!(:
    March 31st, 2011 at 05:05am
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    i didnt comment because i never got the update email thing...
    but it wasnt your fault (:
    March 31st, 2011 at 04:15am
  • EmiR

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    Oh, I set up that collab story. Take a look, it's yours as much as mine now :)
    March 30th, 2011 at 11:26pm
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    Updated! :D
    March 30th, 2011 at 08:58pm
  • EmiR

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    I've seen the trailer. There's an actual plot I think. Two girls get lost on holiday, and want to use the messed up surgeons phone, and stuff.
    March 27th, 2011 at 12:49am
  • EmiR

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    You should probably put insider comments on my profile. Your alienating my commenters xD
    March 26th, 2011 at 11:32am
  • KayCBA

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    PLEASE READ MY NEW STORY "INNOCENCT EYES" It is about a boy who is Japanese set in the time of 1940, when all the Japanese people were put in concentration camps in America. The story is told by an eight year old boy who writes in his diary, "friend" and tells us his story first hand. Based on a true happening, but all from my words to paper. I looked it up and wrote his diary entries so it was me who wrote this story, and there are very little like it. I suppose it is like the boy in striped pajamas, but about a different thing, with a different personality
    March 26th, 2011 at 11:23am
  • Train

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    And thank you for the story comment!!!(:
    March 26th, 2011 at 06:13am
  • Train

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    No problem.(:
    March 26th, 2011 at 06:11am
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    Wrote a review/comment for your story [i]Innocent Eyes[/i]. (:
    March 24th, 2011 at 12:56am
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    I'd love to check it out. (:
    March 24th, 2011 at 12:34am
  • Violet Rocket

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    is it going to be serious or funny?
    March 23rd, 2011 at 11:39pm
  • Train

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    Haha, thanks for commenting!! :D And I updated either every Tuesday or Wednesday. (: Thanks again!
    March 23rd, 2011 at 10:22pm
  • Violet Rocket

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    haha that should be good :D can't wait to read it
    March 22nd, 2011 at 11:00pm
  • EmiR

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    YAY! Thankies :)
    March 20th, 2011 at 08:47pm
  • KayCBA

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    IN 2 WEEKS TIME I WILL BE POSTING A NEW STORY! BE THE FIRST TO CHECK OUT THE TITLE! If you like my stroies then be sure to subscribe. It is going to be in a small boys point of view. An innocent over look of a bad situation. Write on my wall to tell me what it should be about and why.
    March 20th, 2011 at 04:39pm
  • xlookalivesunshinex

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    Yep. Writing a story does take time and effort!! But I can't wait to read you new fanfic, I love the 'Kidnapping My Chemical Romance' one :P
    March 16th, 2011 at 11:34pm
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    AWEOMSE! Have fun writing it :D Wht makes a good story a great story is if you enjoy writing it ;)
    March 15th, 2011 at 09:41pm
  • EmiR

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    I felt like trying my own challenge. I can't be bothered with the words though, and the plot will be very loose. It'l probably be quite long. I shouldn't do this halfway through my FF.net stories, but I can't sleep so what the hell.
    March 13th, 2011 at 11:52pm