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Awe, you did!? YAY!!! That is one of my favorite ideas for a story. At one point I was going to make it a full length story, but that idea sorta failed.

aww glad you liked the update! haha :)
thanks for the comment!

aimeeeeeee <3 thanks for the comment on YATBPOML!
youre so sweet to me just <33 ahh thank you
yeah i have a loose plan for yours.. im having trouble tough :/
but you are getting one with greico for sure. no doubt.

thanks for the comment on DTAL :D
when you said the too much cutenss thing,
it made me think of Holly (Would YOu Turn Me On?) haha
haha i was trying to get that jamesy aspect on there
thankfully, it was just good old Rian :)
dont worry, zoe/matt will come up soon1

you're welcome, not a porblem :D
oh I'm gottalovegaskarth :)

okay good :)
i only write in first person
i think i've only succesfully written in third person once,
and that was on [i]A Blessing In Disguise[/i]
andi t was only one short chapter, and that's it
no its fine! you dont konw what to do, and that's fine!
a co writer is someone you write the story with
usually it goes like this:
you have a character,and your co writer has a character
your brain storm a plot and such then you alternate doing chapters
like let's say I wrote the first chapter of our story for example
that means you'd write chapter 2, then I'd write chapter 3 in my chraracter's P.O.V does that make sense?

i mean ive always liked the idea of it being in a story
but it's just around a lot, you know?
i hope i didn't come across as rude :(
i do like that idea :)
two P.O.Vs would be fun too
and having a co write is much easier your first time around
i love having the co writes i do :D
and brainstorming is MUCH easier :)
so maybe find a co writing partner to continue this on?

its okay about the wait, i hate when thath appens >.<
its like ;IOABVIO;IAWD! i get so mad haha
woo for ATL stories :D all my stories are ATL are except one,
and that's a Glee one :)
for idea 1, i do like it :) but i think you need more of a plot line than that. like just more to it, so maybe expand a bit more on that?
for idea 2, i do like it as well, but it's cliche :/. many people have done this idea and its very obvious how the idea would end, you know?
maybe youc ould somewhat,, combine the two eyes?
maybe the girl has an abusive boyfriend, and Jack offered her consolence and they had sex - and she thought it would help, but it didn't. and she's already friends with the boys, so then seh starts to confide in alex. and he finally gets her to break up with the douchebag boyfriend, and right when he trys to ask her, jack/the girl admit that they had sex. i dunno, scratch that entire idea

well tell me a few of them,
and I'll give you my brutal honest opinion :) what do you say?

haha thanks :D
yeah ivve only seen a few episodes
like sparatically, but its still a great show :D
i havent seen in any of the new ones, just the older ones

and yeah thats totally fine :D
do you have any ideas you wanna go off of ?

sure thing :) wouldnt bother me in the least
right! such an amazing show
i watched every single episod,e
have everything that's available on DVD :D haha
House! defenitly a good one ;)

wow, thank you soi much!
and i dont know, the idea of it all came to me in bed one night during the summer. i dont know, it started off with a very small idea
the whole thing was based on just Zoe and Zack being siblings
I wrote out the first chapter pretty quickly and got some feedback
i dont know, it just grew from there.
mostly from T.V shows and some stories that I've read with a darker aspect
that's how it all came. i dont know.
your eally have to get good characters, if you dont, it's just not good
I could totally help you develop a story if youd like :)
oh its pretty good :D i really like it honestly
though Glee is my favorite, best show ever :)
whats your favorite show?

yay :D
dang i cant believe you read that entrie thing.. just dang
thanks for the comment on both of them :D
DTAL and FYITOMOH! i'm glad you liked that they're married :)
i always planned that of course
but it defenitly took the two long enough! haha :)
but belive me... plenty of drama to come ;D so keep that in mind
and nothing much, about to go watch the season finale of PLL!
missed it last night :/ do you watch pretty little liars?

thanks so much for the comment on HIZNM!
I really appreciate it :D
and the whole thing? Dang.. that's a lot!
thank you so much <3

thanks :D so what are u up too?

eh but thats okay :)
and alright my favorite one ever is :
http://stories.mibba.com/read/273205/Some-Things-Are-Better-Left-Unsaid/
defenilty worth the amount of chapters it is :)

here are some other really good ones:
http://stories.mibba.com/read/309159/Melanie-Flyzik/
http://stories.mibba.com/read/364117/Tell-Me-That-You-Love-Me/
http://stories.mibba.com/read/315157/It-Takes-a-Big-Facade-to-Hide-the-Cracks/
http://stories.mibba.com/read/304084/She-Had-Me-At-Bonjour/
http://stories.mibba.com/read/351248/Colored-Pills-and-Alcohol/

and i think you'd might be interested in reading this once it comes out :)
http://stories.mibba.com/read/370612/How-to-Date-Alex-Gaskarth/

ahh il ove reading ATL fics :)
i could direct you to a couple of good ones if you'd like :)
well hey Aimee :D I'm Melissa :)
haha our usernames give those away..

oh well then hey :D
so you have a tumblr, mibba, and like All Time Low?
wow you are like my clone xD haha!
better not like alex too much though,
already called dibs a LONG time ago ;) haha
and realy? aww why thank you :D
ti's on it's 3rd sequel now already :)
if you dont want to read all of that,
I could tell you waht happened from where you are to now :)

you sent me a random friend request... so.. hi! :)

Lol stayed up with my bf on the phone til 4am and feeling bad cause he had school today and i didnt.

Hi Im Jaimie.
Welcome to mibba.
Maybe we could talk?