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Rude? That's an understatement. (: But that's okay cause it IS more or less my fault. I'll edit Ch. 2 tomorrow cause I'm currently outside with mah phone. And I'll remember to put "not mines" in the author note.

It has so many subscribers already, so I won't take it down, but I made sure everyone knows who the original author is. It's really generous of you guys to let me keep it up, I'm really sorry about it though.

Are you serious? D:
I'm sorry, I didn't mean to copy anything. ;-;

My friend co-wrote the story and I asked her where she got such cool ideas, but she wouldn't tell me. I just looked at Untouched, it IS almost exactly alike. :C

I just realized that i was spelling his name with a "e" becuase i have a friend that spells it like that, but it's pronuced Noah.
Lol, and also what should the title be for the second, i was thinking keeping the "less" at the end of it, like speechless, loveless, fearless, etc.
is that a good idea?

Dylan, since in the second he becomes suspicious of their home life and what not, and i'm going to post the next chapter.

Ok its up (:
tell me if you like it.

Hello (:
I made a layout, and i wanted you to see it and see if you like it.
So tell me if you want me to apply it to the story and then if you like it we can keep it, or we can make a new one (:

epic!!!!! i shall read it!!!!

pic url is the thing at the top of the internet page, you copy and paste it and put it in that little box.

Hi (:
Ok so i wanted to ask you a question.
Did you make a layout for the story yet, oh and maybe we should add a cover on it.
I would text you but, my phone is way upstairs and im too lazy to go up and get it, lol.

omg yay i cant fukkin wait!~!!!

Is it just my shitty computer or is the 'create layout' page in like spanish?????? Xp

ohmyfukkinggawd ... it was amazing!!!!!!!!!!!

thats okay i totally understand i havent updated in 4 eva lol and ty 4 posting on meh wall to let me kno :D

well im acutally going to bed now
but i will talk to you later.
lemme know what you think of my story when you're done! (:

well im 16 but i get your point
i've always been that kind of person
like i like the mall and doing all that stuff
in fact i just went today with my girlfriends
but i much perfer intellegant conversation
about oddities or gruesome events.
lemme ask you this:

do you obsess as much as i do over serial killers?

that's my big thing.
serial killers.
i'm completely obsessed.

yeah sure that would be great.
i love the french revolution.
i have to say though Robespierre was my favorite.
i created a creepier version of him however. (:

not horrible, no.
you can't change the past
so why not revel in the beauty of the raw violence that's already happened.
i know that's probably a sick way to look at it
but i love violent history.
& that's probably what ill write about

wasn't the whole ordeal just fascinating?!
with the committee for public safety & Robespierre with the reign of terror?
anyway. that one still has plenty of bits and pieces to be worked out.

but i was also thinking of writing something about the black death.
or another strange event in history.
i don't know a single classic novel written off the plague.
those kind of things interest me.

a lot based off the french revolution
but i kind of changed my mind about that
i want something stranger
something incredible obscure.
i have a good character set up but everything else needs to come.
you know?

but i'd love feedback on pancakes.
anything at all.
i've got maps drawn up for that
and character sketches and i want this to be great
ill tell you the ending once your done
or what i plan for it at least
if you'd care to know (: