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@ cocoa4ever
You're welcome

@ Neil McCormick
You're welcome <3

@ Cassis.
I'm fine thank you, you?

Thanks very much :)

How are you?

Aw thank you so much for your lovely comments ^_^ <3

Thanks for the comment

@ DramaticLion
Yup.
But I'm not going to reveal who yet >:D

@ Akari Kouda.
Alright, I was thinking something interesting could happen to my character, do you know if your character is ever gonna love someone?

@ DramaticLion
Hmm... over 30. At least.
I want to make this a complicated story.
>:3

And now it's your turn to update again.

@ Mana;;
how many chapters you wanna make

@ DramaticLion
'Kay :3

@ Mana;;
It's finished! You just gotta post it >:)

@ DramaticLion
YAY!~

@ Mana;;
Woot! Lol. I'm in the middle of writing my chapter :D

TIME TO UPDATE BASSY :D

By the way I was Mr. Ripper for Halloween last year... carried around a pair of scissors and died my hair red.

Thank you for the comment on So Long You Pretty Thing. I'll try to make the Bible more interesting JK

I don't even know which story you are referring to. I went to your page and looked through your stories and none of them look familiar. So could you please tell me which one I critiqued?

"I did not intend for anyone to like it or even care it was just a stupid writing piece I wrote to get my mind off shooting myself"

If you did not intend for anyone to read it and enjoy it...why did you post it? Obviously you wanted someone to read it or else it wouldn't on mibba and if you are going to post your writing ONLINE where everyone can see then you best be prepared from some criticism.

I can write much more mature if I have to and do not call me an amateur cause you do not know me personally.

I do not know you personally. I was simply stating that your writing made you seem like an amateur. That's what was perceived. If you are ever published no one is going to read your bio before delving into your book and even if they do they're not going to read a crap story just because they 'know who you are'. My job as a reader isn't to get to know you or feel bad for you or anything, it's to judge your writing and try to help you improve.

Quite frankly you have no idea what is going on through someones head as they are writing so just because someone writes something bad doesn't mean all their writing is bad.

No I don't. I don't know if I ever said I did. Again, i don't remember said review so I have no idea if I said all your writing was bad. I apologize if I do. But if I did, my advice would be to keep practicing and you'll gradually improve.

I've seen some of the other comments on your page and even read 1 of your stories; your grammar isn't perfect neither is your punctuation because no one's writing is absolutely perfect so don't try to be like your writing is.

I never said mine was perfect. In fact, I know mine's (nor anyone else's) is perfect or else I would be published and not posting on fucking mibba. I'm giving advice because I believe I can help you and everyone has some advice they can give. I have experience and I have made mistakes in the past, and I'm making mistakes now and no I'm not perfect and I don't have the answers to everything, but I do know what NOT to do.

And while I'm on this tangent, saying I'm not perfect so I have no right to judge you...well then you are you going to let critique you? Because if you are going to say "You can't judge others without being perfect yourself" then you should never ask someone to review your story ever because there will never be someone good enough.

Also, my writing has absolutely nothing to do with your writing. Even if my writing was the worst in the entire world it doesn't matter...I was trying to give you advice on what I thought would work best for your story. If you don't think what I'm saying will help THEN DON'T LISTEN.

I wrote you some advice trying to help you. I obviously wasted my time, and don't worry I will never waste my time critiquing your work again since I know you can't handle constructive criticism.

Is that why you titled the story 'So Sudden'? If so, then that's really clever, haha.