The 'car scene' was one of my first drafts and it wasn't at all really good. I accidently copied and pasted it into the story box thingy and I only noticed when people started commenting on it so I had to quickly take it out.
Hahahah, that’s true… I guess no one would say that. I’d be okay with concrit though. Everyone’s so nice all the time. I agree you with your rant about people not typing right; that’s one thing that seriously irritates me. It’s not that hard to just type normally. Hahah, I take pride in my grammar :] *blushes* I’m sure it’s possilbe for me to write something horrible, I just make sure it’s not too horrible.
Hey! *Waves* It's Mandy!!
How are you?? I miss talking to you so I thought that I'd leave a message here for you to see!!
(Sorry I'm in a spazing random mood)
I have to get up at six every morning and when I said soon I didn't mean at six I meant around that time and it does actually say that Frank stayed with Gerard for like two hours before going upstairs which would mean it was eight when everyone was up. God, must you criticize EVERYTHING? lol, oh well. I don't really care I just needed something to rant about as did you lol.
Okay, if you haven't read the offline message I sent you on MSN you will NOT know that this (now yesterday as it is 01:15AM exactly) has been a BAD day and your typo pointing out is making me a lot more ARGGGGG!!!!! and now I have decided that when you do post something on the site I shall scrutinise it to its full extent.
~deep breaths~
Okay, I'm calm now but anyway thank you for the constructive comment, I'm not getting many lately and I'm glad you thought the title of this chapter was funny. No one reads the chapter titles much anymore which is kinda sad..but like yeah, whatever. Thanks for the comment. I'm not THAT mad, just kinda pissed. I need to punch something or get drunk into oblivion. ~sigh~ = //
Thanks for your comment on my story... really, I don't know why I never like my writing. I'm never completely happy with anything I do, not just writing, either. But I don't know if you read it before I fixed one part of the story, but i had {skip} put in, and that was a note to myself. So, yeah. I think it was a little weird because I sleep deprived. :]
That was a long comment, sorry.
xoxo
Carly
Thanks for the comment. But haven't you ever heard of the line girls say to brush guys off 'I'm washing my hair that night.' no? fine, whatever. Anyways, thanks. = DD
Nope, Frank didn't have it planned all along, he just decided to make Gerard pay really and he still had his own problem to deal with lol.
Aww, they're in love! Ha! Yeah, I'm really lulling you all into a false sense of security until I smush all of your happy Frerard thoughts MUHAHAH I AM THE PUPPET MASTER!
No, I didn't remember to take my sanity meds and I don't give a fuck MUHAHAHA! ~cough~ ~splutter~ ~cough~ urg, I need some water now. I really should stop laughing like that, my doctor says I’ll have the raspy voice of a 60 year old smoker in a year...oh well! lol.
I had a dream about them last night :''D it was funny. x}