Okay, the only reason I describe the clothes their wearing is because I like people to picture or try to picture what they're wearing before they actually see it.
Should I have not putt all that but Addison's outfit in there like I usually do? Or should I have spread it out more within the chapter instead of saying it all at once?
I'm working on the next Chapter for I only wanted you right now. It should be done soon. I went away last weekend for my birthday and I didn't get it done before I left, but I've been working really hard to get it done. There's just so many distractions at my house, it's pretty annoying. I'm going to try and get it done today. And hopefully post it tonight or tomorrow morning when I get up.
It sound pretty cool. At first, I was all like, wait, who is Max Green, I know the name" then ten seconds later I was "oh yeah! he's from Escape The Fate!" I remember seeing them play at the Hard Rock Cafe, and they were pretty good.
But yeah, like I said, it sounds really good so far!
Hey, I always respond - you took the time to read my stuff AND let me know your thoughts, so the least I can do is reply, right? But yes, of course I will go check out your stuff!
Well firstly, I want to thank you for checking my story out, and I'm so glad to hear that you like it so much! As for your ideas, that is something along the lines as to what I was thinking =) But I will try to get more written A-SAP. Thanks for your support!