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Hello, Friendship is not only because of feelings or what we have but because of understanding, sharing and caring. friendship does not think distance, age or even colour. friendship is not just playing or chatting with each other. but friendship is hearing each others voice from the heart. A friend is a gift from God. someone who will cares as much as i do. i have read your profile and i became interested in you and i will like to know you more, i am miss prisca yak, i want to be your friend please mail on (prisca2yak@yahoo.com) with a picture of you ok? then i will send you my pictures and as well tell you more about me. hope to hear from you soonest. Thanks please reply me here on (prisca2yak@yahoo.com)
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Well, I don't usually read FanFiction :/
I prefer original

Oh of course, thanks for keeping me updated!

Yes you can

Ohh, I guess that does cause quite the problem, doesn't it.

Anyway, I'm looking forward to reading the next part of your story when you have it up.

I felt as if it was just put there. Kind of to throw it in, instead of giving it a real purpose.

Oh thank you!

Why don't you have a picture up?

I did read the description actually. I just feel as if the story needs to be fleshed out more, that your characters personalities should come out a bit more in this beginning part. Instead of telling us, have their actions show us. That the Moon Warrior was just thrown there, kind of hanging precariously.

Just a thought, nothing to be taken too serious dear.

just found out, how, when your at the story you click on subscriptions and it should give you an email to your inbox if that person updates or something i think. if you subsribe i just might put up another chapter, cuz ur the only one thats commented, but glad you like it!

hey, decided to let you know that i accepted your friend request and hope you like my stories! promise to update more soon!

hey, thanks for the comment on my story. And i don't really know how to suscribe for a story but if i find out i promise to let you know. promise to keep updating soon, u inspired me to keep it up!

Txt me.

Hey, commenter. Is she being serious about her story?

One thing, shorten the title! Not alot of people don't like to read a story with a super long title.