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FOR SURE DO THE WEDDING! :) I love your story so much I don't ever want you to end it! :) but do the wedding for sure!! <3

Definitely do the wedding, but after that, I'd probably end it. I'll miss the story, but you should start a new one, and if you want to you can always make a sequel :)

A wedding is a must. After that, maybe it's time to end it. That way you can start on a sequel or perhaps a brand new story all together. I will miss this story though :(

Aww thanks for the comment! I think Jon is a good guy so I couldn't have him being a jerk the whole story! I am pretty sure I am going to update again later today since it is about 2am here. The last chapter was short and two and three sort of coincide with each other. Chapter 4 will have Corey and team! Three is a filler but it needs to be there. So hope you enjoy them!

Thank you for your comment! It always makes me happy to make a character that you generally in real life don't like loveable in a story! Thank you(:

Not going to lie, there's only so much you can do now, Danny and Raina's story is pretty much done. I say no more than 60 chaps, and then anything new can be a side story in the story you're going to be making about Andrej and Danielle?

Ummmm im not sure how much longer it should go cause i really dont want the story to end :[ but as long as the chapter dont get to mushy and you get to the wedding i would just do as many chapters as that takes and maybe instead of an epilogue you can do alittle time skip ? idk but i love your story either way and going to keep reading it till the end :]

I'm sorry but I hate the Ovechtrick commercial, it seems like the only commercial they would play during hockey games, at least where I lived >.<

and I can't stand Ovechkin either, just the sight of him annoys me >.>

Hahaha! That's cute :D

And Ovechkin? When our family went to the Winter Classic my niece was terrified of him. She kept saying he reminded her of a bigfoot who got punched in the face repeatedly xD

I will definitely check out your story! :]

Hahaha and my dad actually loves the Flyers, but my mom is a Penguins fan, so it gets pretty interesting in the house during hockey season xD

Thanks for the comment on my new story, even if you aren't a Canuck fan haha. I grew up in an anti-Boston family, so I figured that wasn't really going to work out if I did a Bruins story xD I hope you enjoy the story though :]

Bahahaha.. Staal. That still makes me smile. And I remember when Mesz played for Tampa. Good times :3 But I'm extremely happy that he's with Philly. Richards. That man...

He is! :) Reminds me of a little kid, every time! But Staal? :X Ewwwwwwwwwwww. I don't blame ya for Crosby and such, but I try and keep a neutral ground when it comes to him. Letang/Pittsburgh < Bobrovsky-Carcillo/Philadelphia, but that's only my opinion. :P

Still! :) It's absolutely adorable!

Jesus Christ, I love Letang. That man.. I'm almost scared to move to Pittsburgh. :/ I'm so proud of him, and I bet you that quarter I mentioned earlier, that if someone bad-mouthed him, I'd go off.

I've totally been neglecting you, but I'm back, baby!

I think that maybe Kris is having some personal troubles, or that he's trying to get her to work with him on something...although the fact that she doesn't want Danny to get suspicious is suspicious D: i'm not sure!

Thanks so much for your comment on [i]Fortress Round My Heart[/i] :) I'll definitely check out your story, I can't resist something with Danny Briere on it.

Well thanks! I appreciate that!!!! :)

Glad you like the story so far. Yeah, their interactions are great, especially with the 3 boys. lol

Thanks for the feedback. I'll look into using Bing.

There will be quite a bit of French, mainly when Claude's interacting with his family, & possibly when he's around Danny and his three boys in later chapters (means there's been actual interviews where they've said they speak in French around the house, I don't wanna get too fictional with it. lol) So there will more then likely be quite a bit of French. I'll have to see which looks better, & easier to read (parenthesis or authors note,) as I'm writing out the chapters. I don't want it to be too jumbled, or difficult to comprehend as a reader is reading, so I'll do my best to try to make it simple.