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  • DizzyFromSpinning

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    I do like his songs where he tends to goof off and I can stand his cursing, but there is just a limit that makes me think 'Really? Does it need to be that dirty?'
    November 7th, 2011 at 11:03am
  • DizzyFromSpinning

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    Fack is actually one of my least favorite songs.
    I mean, granted most of his songs are dirty, but Fack is just a little over-reaching. It's not exactly a song I can play with my family or friends listening in...
    November 6th, 2011 at 12:31am
  • YuffieProductions

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    Thanks for the comment on SuperHero! Glad you like it. :)
    November 5th, 2011 at 06:45pm
  • DizzyFromSpinning

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    Stay tuned to Japan Takeover cuz I'm sure your questions will be answered soon. xD
    November 4th, 2011 at 11:28pm
  • DizzyFromSpinning

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    Cool beans. xD
    I really like Mockingbird & Like Toy Soldiers & 3am.
    How about you?
    November 4th, 2011 at 11:24pm
  • Jaguar's Heart

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    Sorry! I'm working on it right now! Don't know when it'll be up.
    June 18th, 2011 at 04:09am
  • Jaguar's Heart

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    Good, I tried to get the first out, but a lot of stuff ended up happening that day. I'm glad you're happy now XD
    April 11th, 2011 at 10:53pm
  • Jaguar's Heart

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    Wow, 5 days iss a long time. I'll try to update tomorrow, but I'm not going to gaureentee anything because I honestly don't know if I'll be able too. Hopefully you'll get to read another update, but I'm not making any promises. Kay?
    April 4th, 2011 at 05:38am
  • Angel of Wolves

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    Thank you for your comment. And you will have to see later on if it is. *wink wink
    April 1st, 2011 at 11:38pm
  • WaterWisp

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    Well, for starters: WELCOME TO MIBBA!!! xD

    Okay, so grammar - maybe not such a big deal, just a few commas in the wrong places, no biggie.

    Descriptions.. well... It's hard to explain. When I read stories, I can easily picture what is being written. But when I read yours, (take no offense!) there are black patches... does that make sense? o.O?? Anyway, this is what I think, so it prolly doesn't count for much, but when you write, try to expand sentences, add a bit of detail. I try to include as many 'senses' as possible; sight, sound, touch, smell and taste.

    For example, instead of 'I walked into the dark, empty room, I saw Kurt sitting in the corner.' Expand it to something like, 'I stepped cautiously into the gloomy darkness of the old room. The thick, dust filled air clogged up my lungs. A muffled choking noise sounded from deeper within the seemingly empty room. Shuffling forwards, I barely recognized the huddled figure in the corner.... bla bla blaaa... soemthing about his hair shining in from the light let in through the door.... yada yada xP

    Does that clear up anything? And sorry if I seem a bit... I dunno... pushy? bitchy? Weird? o.O?? .... I'm fine with the last xP

    But ya. Hope I helped =D

    OH!!! Also, sorry (again) for the ramble xD I'm in a little bit of a rush, and I tend to ramble when rushed....

    BYE!!!
    April 1st, 2011 at 06:11am
  • Jaguar's Heart

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    I'm planning three total. Ulric's and two others. While that's the plan that's not for sure. It could be more... could be less. Though I'm pretty sure I'm going to do at least one more.
    April 1st, 2011 at 05:36am
  • textgoddess08

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    thanks so much for the comment!(:
    Stay tuned for what comes next!♥Suprises, Suprises.
    March 30th, 2011 at 11:01pm
  • Jaguar's Heart

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    Lol, it's not over yet XD. I was just saying that I normally put their first 'big momment' in the last chapter. I still have a few more chapters left... and I'm thinking about making this a series, so even when it's over, it's really not. And you love my cliff hangers... it keeps you and the other readers coming back XD
    March 30th, 2011 at 06:01am
  • Jaguar's Heart

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    Yeah, their superstitions and fears definitely work. I'm hoping to have an update Saturday, if not then Monday at the latest. I'm excited that you like the story so much!
    March 12th, 2011 at 03:07am
  • Jaguar's Heart

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    Thanks! I got tired of searching for werewolf stories and only getting Twighlight... it was bugging me. As for the year... sometime in the past. Before cars and paved/cooblestone roads. I don't have a set date in mind, but way before America was found and... well... pretty much when it took days to get to the next village on horseback, when all they had was superstitions and traditions. Does that help?
    March 11th, 2011 at 07:57pm
  • DianaLapierre

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    What's ISAT?
    And I'm pretty good, getting ready for the sadies dance((:
    March 6th, 2011 at 12:48am
  • Ellie-phant

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    Ahahaha, you'll figure it out.(:
    March 5th, 2011 at 05:18am
  • xxlovexxmusicxx

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    Thanks for the comment!
    March 5th, 2011 at 12:44am
  • Ellie-phant

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    Ahaha, that's kind of dumb. (Just my personal opinion)
    But you're 13, maybe you'll grow out of it.(:
    My mom hoped I would, but I got my nose pierced when I was a week from 15 and it was all down hill from there. xD

    Life is okay, how about yours??
    March 4th, 2011 at 11:20pm
  • Ellie-phant

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    Ahaha, a cannible?
    Seriously?
    Thank you.(:
    March 4th, 2011 at 06:24am